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Doggone

Sue purchased an old dog named Buster
It took all the cash she could muster
Buster dropped dead that week
So in a fit of pique
Sue rang up the seller and cussed her!

fiction write 

01~20~17

Copyright © Jan Allison | Year Posted 2017

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Eve Roper Date: 1/24/2017 9:07:00 PM haha.. awesome :) Hugs Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 1/21/2017 8:50:00 AM Funny...but Sue was stupid to buy an old dog...I have learnt that from experience:) Hugs // paul Login to Reply

CayCay Jennings Date: 1/21/2017 6:51:00 AM Poor old Buster, poor Sue, poor seller - it's all bad, done so good! You have a limerick mind gift - no doubt about that. Always enjoy them, Jan ... CayCay Login to Reply

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 1/21/2017 3:10:00 AM Poor dear Sue, if your story was true , now I would be blue! Nice one dear Jan! Login to Reply

Arthur Vaso Date: 1/20/2017 2:46:00 PM Good thing she didn't buy a husband! cute! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 1/20/2017 2:51:00 PM ha ha ha If they are on 'bogof' at Valentines it would be wise if she should got one then:-) hugs jan xx

Maurice Rigoler Date: 1/20/2017 2:22:00 PM And well she should have! A fine limerick. Jan, I would have written for lines 3 and 4: Buster died of old age so in a fit of rage. Thanks for reading my B poem. There's a name to this form but I can't recall it. Looking forward to your next poem. / M Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 1/20/2017 2:30:00 PM thanks for the suggestion of the lines Maurice its lovely to get different ideas on the original:-) Loved your B poem!!:-) hugs jan xx

Ilene Bauer Date: 1/20/2017 1:34:00 PM ha! very cute one, jan! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 1/20/2017 1:57:00 PM Thanks Ilene its humourous in a sad sort of way:-) hugs jan xx

Lim'Rik Flats Date: 1/20/2017 1:24:00 PM Rest in peace, departed mutt//soured deal, unkind cut//Cuss her out//with a shout//mebbe knock seller on the butt! Otay, I'll behave now. ~ j Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 1/20/2017 1:57:00 PM ha ha ha you and behave in the same sentence is impossible lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Charmaine Chircop Date: 1/20/2017 10:11:00 AM Wahaha..That's what I would do too...even if I dnt cuss...haha...Lol..You sweet you Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 1/20/2017 11:08:00 AM It's sad Charma and thankfully its fiction, but I can imagine it happening if you take on an old dog. :-( hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith Date: 1/20/2017 8:17:00 AM You definitely have to be careful where you get the doggie..Poor little fella Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 1/20/2017 8:43:00 AM Yes 'doggone' was a very apt title Tim!:-( hugs jan xx

Casarah Nance Date: 1/20/2017 7:42:00 AM oh that would be the worst! clever write Jan. hugs Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 1/20/2017 7:49:00 AM It would be terrible Cas but I guess if you buy an old dog that's the chance you take:-( hugs Jan xx

Chris Green Date: 1/20/2017 7:09:00 AM Sounds like she legitimately had a bone to pick with that seller. :) Once again, your humor has brought a smile to my day. Nicely done Jan. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 1/20/2017 7:21:00 AM Its a fiction write that is sad if it happened but I guess let the buyer beware springs to mind. I was originally going to write about a car called a 'duster' but thought I'd get litigation if I said one broke down after a week lol:-) hugs Jan xx