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Out here on the open road. Wheee! No care in the world, going fast. Fresh country scents blowing on me. Cool animals we’re going past! No care in the world – going fast. I’m in the car with my best friend. Cool animals we’re going past. I hope this day will never end. I’m in the car with my best friend, Fresh country scents blowing on me. I hope this day will never end. Out here on the open road. Wheee! June 8, 2020 for Eve Roper's Pantoum Rhyme And Personification Poetry Contest Based on picture #2

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Date: 6/14/2020 7:32:00 PM
Enjoying a scenic ride, Congrats on your win Andrea
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Date: 6/14/2020 5:16:00 PM
VERY cute pantoum of a very cute dog, congrats on your win with Eve. Hugs ~ John
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Date: 6/14/2020 4:51:00 PM
Andrea, Dog on the Open Road, was an enjoyable read with perfect rhyme and flow. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 6/10/2020 3:14:00 PM
Wow! Love the innocence and happiness dripping through your words. You took me back to my childhood and cute memories. Love and blessings dear Andrea :) Best wishes for the contest.
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Date: 6/10/2020 11:12:00 AM
This is perfect! So great for Eve's contest Andrea.
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Date: 6/9/2020 5:52:00 PM
I am loving all the pantoum contest entries. It's nice to read some light but sweet poetry to brighten my day. Hugs to you, Rhonda
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Date: 6/9/2020 1:42:00 PM
This is a great poem. Our dog loves sticking his head out the window. He really enjoys doing it with his best friend.
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Date: 6/9/2020 11:36:00 AM
Oh my gosh, this picture is too cute. <3 :) You've captured the mood perfectly. <3
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Date: 6/9/2020 9:06:00 AM
Too cute Andrea. I'm sure that's what goes through their minds when they go for car rides. Wheeeee! Look at me! I'm in a car going real fast! Great stuff. It made me smile. God Bless, JB
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Date: 6/9/2020 9:01:00 AM
Andrea, Very nice ride in this Pantoum. Oh to live a dog's life. Soft spot in my heart for Man's best and second best friend. -Richard
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Date: 6/9/2020 5:22:00 AM
Adorable, Andrea!
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Date: 6/9/2020 12:54:00 AM
Oh yes, you sure have got this right, Andrea, sure Eve will love it..
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Date: 6/9/2020 12:54:00 AM
I hope this poem will never end...Sweet Pantoum Andrea.. Good luck in the contest..
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Date: 6/8/2020 9:01:00 PM
Interesting how you've got the dog perceiving the animals as 'cool animals.' Whee! Dog's sure having a great time! Great write, Andrea! Cheers, Gershon
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Date: 6/8/2020 7:18:00 PM
Deeeelightful write, Andrea, and a top winner for sure! Always enjoy your poems - Bob H
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Date: 6/8/2020 7:06:00 PM
Ohhh...Wow, I can feel the fresh scents soothing my soul! Wheee!!! Carefree ...Straight to my faves!!!
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Date: 6/8/2020 5:21:00 PM
Nothing beats the open road Andrea, Thelma and Louise comes to mind Tom
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