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Dog On the Open Road

Out here on the open road. Wheee!
No care in the world, going fast.
Fresh country scents blowing on me.
Cool animals we’re going past!

No care in the world – going fast.
I’m in the car with my best friend.
Cool animals we’re going past.
I hope this day will never end.

I’m in the car with my best friend,
Fresh country scents blowing on me.
I hope this day will never end.
Out here on the open road. Wheee!

June 8, 2020
for Eve Roper's Pantoum Rhyme And Personification Poetry Contest
Based on picture #2

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Joseph May

Date: 6/14/2020 7:32:00 PM

Enjoying a scenic ride, Congrats on your win Andrea

John Watt

Date: 6/14/2020 5:16:00 PM

VERY cute pantoum of a very cute dog, congrats on your win with Eve. Hugs ~ John

Eve Roper

Date: 6/14/2020 4:51:00 PM

Andrea, Dog on the Open Road, was an enjoyable read with perfect rhyme and flow. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Aditi Mishra

Date: 6/10/2020 3:14:00 PM

Wow! Love the innocence and happiness dripping through your words. You took me back to my childhood and cute memories. Love and blessings dear Andrea :) Best wishes for the contest.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 6/10/2020 11:12:00 AM

This is perfect! So great for Eve's contest Andrea.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 6/9/2020 5:52:00 PM

I am loving all the pantoum contest entries. It's nice to read some light but sweet poetry to brighten my day. Hugs to you, Rhonda

Bette Bavington

Date: 6/9/2020 1:42:00 PM

This is a great poem. Our dog loves sticking his head out the window. He really enjoys doing it with his best friend.

Robert Johnson

Date: 6/9/2020 11:36:00 AM

Oh my gosh, this picture is too cute. <3 :) You've captured the mood perfectly. <3

Judy Ball

Date: 6/9/2020 9:06:00 AM

Too cute Andrea. I'm sure that's what goes through their minds when they go for car rides. Wheeeee! Look at me! I'm in a car going real fast! Great stuff. It made me smile. God Bless, JB

Quoth Theraven

Date: 6/9/2020 9:01:00 AM

Andrea, Very nice ride in this Pantoum. Oh to live a dog's life. Soft spot in my heart for Man's best and second best friend. -Richard

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/9/2020 5:22:00 AM

Adorable, Andrea!

Harry Horsman

Date: 6/9/2020 12:54:00 AM

Oh yes, you sure have got this right, Andrea, sure Eve will love it..

Jenish Somadas

Date: 6/9/2020 12:54:00 AM

I hope this poem will never end...Sweet Pantoum Andrea.. Good luck in the contest..

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/8/2020 9:01:00 PM

Interesting how you've got the dog perceiving the animals as 'cool animals.' Whee! Dog's sure having a great time! Great write, Andrea! Cheers, Gershon