Paula Goldsmith Poet Rhyme

Dog Chases Tail

Dog chases his tail round and round,
was he spell bound?
He looks very funny,
like a wound up dog bunny.
Did you ever feel like this crazy dog?
Are you living in a fog? 
Maybe you are asking where am I going?
Is life unknowing?
Could we be chasing our own tail?
Take a deep breath and have a cold ginger ale.

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Gershon Wolf August 17, 2025 at 7:54 PM I know of some writers who keep chasing tales... Well, I told you my funnybone is injured. Keep smiling, Paula.

Kim Rodrigues August 15, 2025 at 12:08 PM Another cute one! You wax philosophical at the end! <3 Paula Goldsmith August 16, 2025 at 11:51 AM It was a Joy to see your note. "Thank You" Glad you found my fun "Dog Chases Tail" to be, Another cute one. That makes me happy. It was so much fun to write. Take a deep breath and go writing away.........

CayCay Godwin August 14, 2025 at 8:58 AM How cute and adorable this clever write is, love it's off the wall topics and irrelevance that brings a smile to me. Thanks for that! Poetry hugs ... CayCay Paula Goldsmith August 14, 2025 at 1:53 PM  It was a Joy to see your note. "Thank You" Glad you found my fun "Dog Chases Tail" to be, cute and adorable. It was a ton of fun to write. Glad this made you smile. I love to give out "Smiles." Hugs... Take a deep breath and go writing away.........

Anne-Lise Andresen August 14, 2025 at 12:48 AM - :))) ... I can clearly see your "picture" of the dog ... fun to read, Paula :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs Paula Goldsmith August 14, 2025 at 1:50 PM  It was a Joy to see your note. "Thank You" Glad you found my fun "Dog Chases Tail" to be, fun to read.  Also thanks for your, Best wishes in the contest. Hugs... Take a deep breath and go writing away.........

Bill Baker August 13, 2025 at 9:26 PM A entertaining read, my friend, and a good entry for the contest. Good Luck! Bill Paula Goldsmith August 14, 2025 at 1:48 PM It was a Joy to see your note. "Thank You" Glad you found my fun "Dog Chases Tail" to be, A entertaining read. Also thanks for your, Good Luck. Take a deep breath and go writing away.........

Terry Miller August 13, 2025 at 7:33 AM I could do with a ginger ale right now, what an amusing fun write Paula Paula Goldsmith August 14, 2025 at 1:46 PM It was a Joy to see your note. "Thank You" Glad you found my fun "Dog Chases Tail" to be an, amusing fun write. I would love an ice cold ginger ale in this 110 weather. Take a deep breath and go writing away.........

Sotto Poet August 13, 2025 at 3:45 AM This brought a smile to my face. Joyful and bright, yet with a ponderous turn at the close. Adore the way you’ve spun that whimsical picture into a mirror of existence! Good luck Paula Paula Goldsmith August 14, 2025 at 1:42 PM It was a Joy to see your note. "Thank You" Glad you enjoyed reading my fun "Dog Chases Tail" write. Also thanks for your, Good luck. Glad this made you smile. I love to give out "Smiles." Take a deep breath and go writing away.........

Victor Buhagiar August 13, 2025 at 3:28 AM Humorous verse, Paula. Loved it. Paula Goldsmith August 14, 2025 at 1:39 PM It was a Joy to see your note. "Thank You" Glad you Loved reading my fun "Dog Chases Tail" write. Also glad you found this to be, Humorous. It was a ton of fun to write. Take a deep breath and go writing away.........

Valsa George August 13, 2025 at 12:39 AM "Take a deep breath and have a cold ginger ale." Love the suggestion at the end. Dogs do it involuntarily as a habit. But it can be due to tension too. Taking a deep breath releases tension. This can be seen as a fun write. All the best, dear Paula. Paula Goldsmith August 14, 2025 at 1:37 PM It was a Joy to see your note. "Thank You" Glad you enjoyed reading my fun "Dog Chases Tail" write. Also thanks for your, All the best. This was fun to bring to life. Take a deep breath and go writing away.........

Rowena Velasco August 12, 2025 at 8:29 PM This made me smile. Fun and light, but with a thoughtful little twist at the end. Love how you turned the silly image into a life reflection! Paula Goldsmith August 14, 2025 at 1:34 PM It was a Joy to see your note. "Thank You" Glad you enjoyed reading my fun "Dog Chases Tail" write. Also glad this made you smile. I love to give out "Smiles." Take a deep breath and go writing away.........

sara Etgen-Baker August 12, 2025 at 5:11 PM I could use that cold ginger ale right now. Nice rhyme scheme and flow...best wishes with the contest, hugs Sara Paula Goldsmith August 14, 2025 at 1:31 PM It was a Joy to see your note. "Thank You" Glad you found my fun "Dog Chases Tail" write to have, Nice rhyme scheme and flow. I would love an ice cold ginger ale in this 110 weather. Take a deep breath and go writing away.........

John Fleming August 12, 2025 at 2:21 PM I agree with everyone else...a nice cold ginger ale would go down a real treat right now. :) john Paula Goldsmith August 14, 2025 at 1:27 PM It was a Joy to see your note. "Thank You" Glad you enjoyed reading my fun "Dog Chases Tail" write. Yes, I love ice cold ginger ale and it would be great in this 110 weather. Take a deep breath and go writing away.........

Joseph P. DiMino August 12, 2025 at 1:54 PM After tail chasing, a cold ginger ale is in order. Delightful read! Paula Goldsmith August 14, 2025 at 1:25 PM It was a Joy to see your note. "Thank You" Glad you found my fun "Dog Chases Tail" write to be a, Delightful read. Yes, I love ice cold ginger ale. Take a deep breath and go writing away.........

Mystic Rose Rose August 12, 2025 at 1:42 PM lol gingerale helps alot in so many cases, its one of my favorite drinks Paula :) Paula Goldsmith August 14, 2025 at 1:23 PM It was a Joy to see your note. "Thank You" Glad you enjoyed reading my fun "Dog Chases Tail" write. I also love cold ginger ale. Take a deep breath and go writing away.........

Paula Goldsmith August 12, 2025 at 12:22 PM Dog Chases Tail ~ Date Written:8/12/2025 ~ Written By Human Poet.... ~~~~ Pick-A-Title, Vol 54 Poetry Contest. Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh ~~~~