Doctor Strange and Doctor Doom Go To Hell

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"Surely the day is coming; it will burn like a furnace. All the arrogant and every evil doer will be stubble, and that day that is coming will set them on fire,' says the Lord Almighty. Not a root or branch will be left to them ... and they will be ashes under the soles of your feet." Malachi 4:1-3, Old Testament Prophet dr stephen strange, was a egotistical doctor till he hurt his hands and seeking a cure he found the ancient one to become sorcerer supreme dr victor von doom, monarch he wears an iron mask to hide his evil scarred face arrogant, superior, he has no mercy he is very powerful doom's mother was killed in a bargain gone wrong with the mephisto aged genghis, a powerful wizard calls a meeting for all sorcerers there is a wild battle that leaves only strange and doom strange in the end is winner but the runner up doom is granted a gift he wants to free is mother with dr strange's help but, doom plans to exchange strange's soul for his mothers soul entering hell they battle the hellfire demons satan is angry he sets black ravens and sandstorms to stop them and they get separated they wander in hell searching till doom meets up with satan and makes a deal to free his mother's soul he will exchange strange's soul his mother is disgusted in a battle with satan the doctors win cynthia is then freed and goes to heaven strange and doom return to earth was it a triumph dr doom had an evil plan in the name of love well, he got what he wanted and that was to at last free his mother's soul ____________________ March 09, 2023 Poetry/Suzette Prime/Doctor Strange and Doctor Doom Go To Hell Copyright Protected, ID 03-1530-378-09 All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France Suzette Prime is a form created by Suzette Richards of PS Written for the Premiere contest, Hell sponsor, Robert James Liguori, Judged 03/10/2023 First Place

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