Doctor Strange and Doctor Doom Go To Hell

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"Surely the day is coming; it will burn like a furnace. All the arrogant
and every evil doer will be stubble, and that day that is coming will set
them on fire,' says the Lord Almighty. Not a root or branch will be left
to them ... and they will be ashes under the soles of your feet." 

                                         Malachi 4:1-3, Old Testament Prophet

dr  stephen strange, was a egotistical doctor
till he hurt his hands
and seeking a cure he found the ancient one
to become sorcerer supreme

dr victor von doom, monarch
he wears an iron mask to hide his evil scarred face
arrogant, superior, he has no mercy
he is very powerful

doom's mother was killed
in a bargain gone wrong with the mephisto
aged genghis, a powerful wizard calls a meeting
for all sorcerers

there is
a wild battle that leaves only strange and doom
strange in the end is winner
but the runner up doom is granted a gift

he wants to free is mother
with dr strange's help
but, doom plans
to exchange strange's soul for his mothers soul 

entering hell they battle the hellfire demons
satan is angry
he sets black ravens and sandstorms to stop them
and they get separated

they wander in hell searching
till doom meets up with satan and makes a deal
to free his mother's soul he will exchange strange's soul
his mother is disgusted

in a battle with satan the doctors win
cynthia is then freed and goes to heaven
strange and doom return to earth
was it a triumph

dr doom had an evil plan
in the name of love
well, he got what he wanted
and that was to at last free his mother's soul

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March 09, 2023


Poetry/Suzette Prime/Doctor Strange and Doctor Doom Go To Hell
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All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France

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Written for the Premiere contest, Hell
sponsor, Robert James Liguori, Judged 03/10/2023

First Place

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