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Do You Think It's Right To Judge Me

DO YOU THINK IT'S RIGHT TO JUDGE ME
BECAUSE THE COLOR OF MY SKIN
WHEN YOUR THE ONE SITTING IN THE SUN YELLING
I NEED TO GET SOME TANNING IN
DO YOU THINK IT'S RIGHT TO JUDGE ME
BECAUSE OF MY NAPPY HAIR
IT'S OKAY
I LOVE IT
GONE HEAD AND STAIR 
DO YOU THINK IT'S RIGHT TO JUDGE ME
BECAUSE I TALK LOUD
WHEN I'M HAPPY
I DON'T THINK YOU SHOULD
BECAUSE YOU DON'T EVEN KNOW ME
DO YOU UNDERSTAND ME?
DO YOU THINK IT'S RIGHT TO JUDGE ME
WHEN I SING THE BLUES
THAT YOU NOD YOUR HEAD TO
WHEN I WALK WITH CURVES
THAT YOU WISH YOU HAD
BOO
IS IT BECAUSE MY SKIN
IS FLAWLESS AND MY TEETH IS WHITE
JUST ANSWER THIS
DO YOU THINK IT'S RIGHT TO JUDGE ME
BECAUSE THE COLOR OF MY SKIN

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Skat A

Date: 5/17/2015 10:08:00 AM

this is not a haiku or even close. However it is awesome and powerful. Forever *SKAT*

Robert Stoner Jr

Date: 5/11/2015 6:10:00 PM

I like your message it is clear and understandable.I believe it would have more impact without the capitals throughout. With some punctuation to emphasize your plea I think they would be more dramatic and cutting. Keep writing your message is good and needs to be heard. Thanks for the poem.