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Do You Think It's Right To Judge Me

DO YOU THINK IT'S RIGHT TO JUDGE ME BECAUSE THE COLOR OF MY SKIN WHEN YOUR THE ONE SITTING IN THE SUN YELLING I NEED TO GET SOME TANNING IN DO YOU THINK IT'S RIGHT TO JUDGE ME BECAUSE OF MY NAPPY HAIR IT'S OKAY I LOVE IT GONE HEAD AND STAIR DO YOU THINK IT'S RIGHT TO JUDGE ME BECAUSE I TALK LOUD WHEN I'M HAPPY I DON'T THINK YOU SHOULD BECAUSE YOU DON'T EVEN KNOW ME DO YOU UNDERSTAND ME? DO YOU THINK IT'S RIGHT TO JUDGE ME WHEN I SING THE BLUES THAT YOU NOD YOUR HEAD TO WHEN I WALK WITH CURVES THAT YOU WISH YOU HAD BOO IS IT BECAUSE MY SKIN IS FLAWLESS AND MY TEETH IS WHITE JUST ANSWER THIS DO YOU THINK IT'S RIGHT TO JUDGE ME BECAUSE THE COLOR OF MY SKIN

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Skat A

Date: 5/17/2015 10:08:00 AM

this is not a haiku or even close. However it is awesome and powerful. Forever *SKAT*

Robert Stoner Jr

Date: 5/11/2015 6:10:00 PM

I like your message it is clear and understandable.I believe it would have more impact without the capitals throughout. With some punctuation to emphasize your plea I think they would be more dramatic and cutting. Keep writing your message is good and needs to be heard. Thanks for the poem.