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Do you remember, when life was simple, you walked instead of drove. You were slimmer and much healthier, you noticed what was around you and above. Do you remember, when churches were full, shops were shut on the Lords day. The collecting trays were full of money. Showing earnest faces when they pray. Do you remember, when life was all around you, children safe to play outside rolling marbles in the gutter, skipping ropes from side to side. No eat by dates or sell by dates food never went off kept in a larder within. Fats were stored  in an outside place in a butter safe and flour in a bin. These are the days my parents spoke of life was busy but with not so much stress. Some modern ways are so much better except sitting at a table as a family has no redress. Conversation was at a premium not finger tapping on a phone. Vocabulary was of the old kind actually speaking with someone. In some ways modern ways are better when your sick medicine is at its prime. Hospitals are full now. People  living longer 80 is the new 69. Do YOU remember? This was written on 1st October 2013 Page 7 of my poem list

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Date: 8/16/2015 1:02:00 AM
Seren, Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soup's home page :). **SKAT**
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Date: 6/30/2015 6:38:00 PM
Seren, Congratulations on your old favorite poem. Always ~LINDA~
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Date: 6/28/2015 9:15:00 AM
I do remember and If I am honest the good old days were not all as good as we sometimes wish to remember them. Thank God for selective memory! I enjoyed your winning poem.
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Date: 6/28/2015 12:42:00 AM
Seren, Congrats on your win......Love SKAT
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Date: 6/27/2015 8:03:00 PM
Great write, Seren! Congrats on your 1st place win! Love, Kim
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Date: 6/27/2015 3:33:00 AM
yes and if only we could return to them life was more fun and much safer Seren Congrats on 1st place hugs
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Date: 1/10/2013 10:50:00 AM
I partially remember some of these things my friend! I really enjoyed reading about these and all of their glory that they had during their time in history! What a powerful message you presented with this delightful poem here Seren! What an amazing piece, Great Work!!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 1/10/2013 11:00:00 AM
Thank you Russell, used to listen to my folks as they talked about the old days. glad i remembered some of it.....Seren
Date: 1/10/2013 1:58:00 AM
Seren you had me thinking you are older than you say, but then I read further on, and yes I do remember....David
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Seren Roberts
Date: 1/10/2013 11:02:00 AM
Glad you spotted i was referring to my folks, wrote a few with them in mind today. thanks for being so kind David.....Seren
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David Williams
Date: 1/10/2013 3:07:00 AM
the poem is very nostalgic, but I hated having to go outside to the 'safe' in the freezing cold weather for the butter...bbbrrrrrr
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Seren Roberts
Date: 1/10/2013 2:14:00 AM
Lol thanks to.my Tad, I know about National Service, things like I had written probably a few more jewels locked away . He loved to think back and talk about the old days. I miss that
Date: 1/10/2013 12:28:00 AM
I certainly do remember, being born in the 40's raise in the 50's and 60's believe me Seren the best generation this planet as ever produced,, and of course Rock 'n' Roll, love your poem,, you really are on the ball with this wonderful gem....
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Seren Roberts
Date: 1/10/2013 12:32:00 AM
Wow Harry you look so much younger must be in the new 50s .. Glad it brought back memories for you. Was going to do one with the modern version of old words, but thought I might have difficulties. Maybe you can try?...Seren

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