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Do You Feel It

Did you feel that moment? That unexpected hum of heartbeat in your ears, the rise of blush upon your cheeks, the sudden ache within your breast and loins? Was it merely physical a chemical imbalance of love and lust intermixed, of passion that ignited breath and heart and soul? Wanting and needing you that was all I needed to know. Did you feel it Do you feel it now? Seize the moment and its passion come closer I'm but a breath away.

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Date: 9/8/2016 7:56:00 AM
"I am but a breath away"...so romantic DM, "chemical imbalance" loved that line too, well written and beautifully expressed :)-luloo
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Date: 9/8/2016 12:08:00 AM
Dm, if one does not feel it, that physical thing, then it is not worth the time, great write and I like it a lot (I am sending you a soup mail in a moment)
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Date: 9/7/2016 3:29:00 PM
YES< this is great passion in this one!! I really love how you did this, DM!! glad I awakened your memories of Three dog Night!
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