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Do Si Do Your Partner

I hold three magic rocks, in My hand. Rolling them over and over and over leaving this reality far behind. Amber, golden, polished, yet flawed and fecund, a dollop of honeyed sunshine, light and pulse, surrounds the remnants of wing and limb. Opalescent egg of rainbow and pearl, chill and slippery; the second shape crosses the surface of the amber sun, warily and with grace. Turquoise mottled and marbled with veins of ocean blue and pastoral green the third rock spins around and between the globes of white and gold. Life writhes. My eyes pierce the depth of ocean and atoms of hydrogen cling to singular atoms of oxygen positive and negative charges mirror the Earthly psyche of Yin and yang. Within the amber ball hydrogen dances with helium. Electron clouds orbit proton cores, just as the three globes spin round in the palm of the Universe, Do Si Do ing with the uncharged, seemly barren, third opalescent egg which mirrors the neutron in a molecular night. Far below on the turquoise marble, man looks skyward into the MY All Seeing Eye of God. Then into his own palm where the dance continues.

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Date: 11/25/2009 11:06:00 AM
Congratulations Deborah on your win in Constance's excellent contest >> James,x
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Date: 11/23/2009 12:20:00 PM
Wonderfully imaginative. Congratulations on your win. Love, joyce
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Date: 11/23/2009 7:56:00 AM
You have the ability to out-write the multitudes...this proves it!! Congrats on your winning poem, Deb!! Well done, ... you stand out in the crowd! ~ Love Carrie
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Date: 11/22/2009 9:20:00 PM
See, Deb, never doubt about your poetry.. congrats on your winning poem in the Magical Journey contest.. and u thought nobody liked it... go on... this is a well deserved win for a wonderful write.. happy to be sharing the same stage with u.. luv.. Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 11/19/2009 12:28:00 AM
Debbie thank you for your welcome blog comments today.rgds Brian
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Date: 11/18/2009 5:34:00 PM
Debbie, A beautiful read. Love the chemistry and spirit in this poetic write. Good luck in contest! Smile...Ought to do quite well. Take care. Keep writing! Thanks for sharing. Love Light Patty
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Date: 11/18/2009 2:50:00 PM
Soup Mail... again...
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Date: 11/18/2009 9:23:00 AM
Soup Mail.. and I liked this poem as in my previous comment below...made me want to get up and dance and I luv dancing as much as I luv writing poetry... luv.. Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 11/18/2009 1:01:00 AM
Best wishes with this one Debbie it goes with a 'swing'.thank you for your welcome comments today.Rgds Brian
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Date: 11/17/2009 6:28:00 PM
Good luck in the contest. Vince
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Date: 11/16/2009 5:57:00 AM
Wonderful, Deborah, and much luck in the contest.. truly unique writing.. and ... please .. u don't have to hide under the desk.. will try to work on my entry again if my busy day allows me to fit it in .. did not know the words needed the shape also.. how much time do I have left? I just luv challenges ... will do my best and thankxxx for all your "pointers" .. appreciated u taking all this time for lil ole me.... blessings ... luv.. Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 11/15/2009 5:00:00 PM
Oh yeah this grabbed me. The colours and chemistry, science but with soul. Very enjoyable read.
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