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Do Not Go Willingly Into the Dark Night

A parody of 'Do Not Go Gentle Into That Good Night' Mea Culpa, Mea Culpa to Dylan Thomas Do not go willingly into the dark night Evil lurks in shadows at the end of each day Rage, rage against the things that cause fright Though wicked ones know wrong from right, They lie in wait to capture their prey Do not go willingly into the dark night Like vampires who hide when the sun is bright Goblins and fiends can be held at bay Rage, rage against the things that cause fright Wild beasts swoop down from such great height With sharp talons they'll grab you and fly away Do not go willingly into the dark night Werewolves prowl about in the moonlight Creatures with fangs that howl and bray Rage, rage against the things that cause fright Demons unleash their hounds with orders to bite If you must leave, don't dally or delay Do not go willingly into the dark night Rage, rage against the things that cause fright December 22, 2020 Entered in L Milton Hankins' Parody of a Famous Poem Contest

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Date: 1/9/2021 10:51:00 AM
congrats on your win Jenna! a lovely parody and so descriptive!
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Date: 1/9/2021 7:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful picture to go with your write. Enjoy your win and weekend with blessings............
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Date: 1/8/2021 9:32:00 PM
Jenna, CONGRATS on your well-deserved win! Janice
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Jenna Logan
Date: 1/9/2021 4:56:00 AM
Thank you very much, Janice.
Date: 1/8/2021 7:18:00 PM
Hi Jenna, back with congratulations on your placement in the contest, well done. Belle
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Jenna Logan
Date: 1/9/2021 4:55:00 AM
Thanks Belle. I appreciate your re-visit to my poem.
Date: 1/3/2021 3:44:00 PM
Jenna, this is a brilliant adaptation of the great Dylan Thomas villanelle with a cast of spooky creatures out there in the literal dark night. Wonderfully rhymed and constructed, I hope you had as much fun writing this as I did reading it! ~ John
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Jenna Logan
Date: 1/9/2021 4:54:00 AM
I always enjoy writing, but especially off-the-wall ideas. lol Thank you for always being encouraging, John.
Date: 12/23/2020 7:22:00 AM
Nicely done my friend. I had just read Dylan Thomas a couple weeks ago so it was fresh on my mind. This sould place well in the contest. Hugs.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 12/23/2020 10:16:00 AM
Thanks, John. In any event, it was fun to create a different version.
Date: 12/22/2020 5:00:00 PM
I don't know the original, but this is creative, dramatic -- and superbly penned. Bravo, Gershon
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Jenna Logan
Date: 12/23/2020 10:15:00 AM
Dylan's poem was a rage against growing old. Thank you, Gershon.
Date: 12/22/2020 1:46:00 PM
Brilliantly done, Jenna!:-) I love your parody of "Do Not Go Gentle Into That Goodnight." I managed to do my Langston Hughes' "Dream Deferred" parody keeping his poem intact. I initially wanted to deconstruct it but it felt sacrilegious almost, lol.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 12/22/2020 2:30:00 PM
Oh Edward, I read your parody earlier today and a phone call pulled me away. I thought the way you posted the original interspersed with your take was ingenious! I promise to return and leave a comment soon. Thanks for liking my entry.
Date: 12/22/2020 11:10:00 AM
Very profound! I love it Jenna, well done!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 12/22/2020 11:28:00 AM
and in darkness we both wrote of evil. Thanks, Mark.
Date: 12/22/2020 11:07:00 AM
A wonderful parody of 'Do Not Go Gentle Into That Good Night' by Dylan Thomas. Mea Culpa, not heard that before, looked up the meaning, “Through my fault”... Best wishes for the contest. Belle
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Jenna Logan
Date: 12/22/2020 11:10:00 AM
Thank you very much, Belle. It's Latin that I remember from a Catholic upbringing.

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