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Do Not Flatter Me


Please, do not try to flatter me
with those capricious words you speak,
perspicuous but inurbane...
their undercurrent, quite oblique.

They may seem kind to you for sure;
beneath, though sweet, alienate
with mean, malignant metaphors
that make the sugar dissipate.

I will not be your sought scapegoat
and gravitate to cunning words;
with meanings so transitory...
they're swished away like flocks of birds.


Sandra M. Haight

~2nd Place~
Contest: Ten Word Challenge
Sponsor: John Hamilton
Judged: 09/17/2016

Required Words to Use:
alienate, capricious, dissipate, gravitate, flatter, inurbane, 
malignant, perspicuous, transitory, scapegoat
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Inman Avatar
September 18, 2016 at 12:22 PM
Sandra, is this about one of the comments I left for you? Lol, you've written a biting piece that reads well and uses the words eloquently. Well done Sandra.
Martins Avatar
September 18, 2016 at 9:34 AM
Congrats on your placement, loved your words :) Richard
U.D Palawon  Avatar
September 18, 2016 at 6:36 AM
So well said using the ten words Sandra...everyday we meet so many with malicious intentions and sweet words....alas "il nous faut tout pour faire un monde!" Congrats.
U.D Palawon  Avatar
September 18, 2016 at 10:04 AM
:)
Haight Avatar
September 18, 2016 at 8:18 AM
Thank you, Sunita, for your supportive comment and congrats! And for the quote in French, which I researched and think it means "it takes all sorts to make a world" ?? Hugs, Sandra
Wigley Avatar
September 18, 2016 at 12:35 AM
Terrifique, Sandra, love the flow, too. Well done! Viv x
Haight Avatar
September 18, 2016 at 8:10 AM
Thank you, Viv! Sandra
May Avatar
September 17, 2016 at 3:31 PM
I like how you used the words...Congrats on your win Sandra
Haight Avatar
September 18, 2016 at 8:10 AM
Thank you very much, Joseph! Sandra
Hamilton Avatar
September 17, 2016 at 3:10 PM
Great use of the 10 words Sandra, very poetic with a strong meaning. Congrats on a fine win!
Haight Avatar
September 18, 2016 at 8:10 AM
I enjoyed the challenge, John, and thanks for offering a chance to meet it. Also, thanks so much for my fine placement! Sandra
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August 31, 2016 at 5:50 PM
Wow! Nice one. I admit I was intimidated by the mandatory words. Good luck! Agnes
Vaso Avatar
August 30, 2016 at 10:59 PM
I am almost afraid to praise this poem! LOL I loved it!!!!!!
Haight Avatar
August 31, 2016 at 7:40 AM
Ha, Ha, Arthur! You can flatter me all you want! Thanks for the 'I loved it!' Sandra
Turner Avatar
August 30, 2016 at 9:34 PM
Mrs Sandra, you certainly made this look easy! So eloquent! I'm sure Mr John will be as pleasantly impressed as I was.
Haight Avatar
August 31, 2016 at 7:41 AM
Thank you, Daniel. It was challenging! I appreciate your confidence that John will like it. Sandra
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