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Do Not Abandon Me

"LOVE, just four letters for a very powerful word." By Poet
Why does life start out from a loving mother, only to be given to another? This loving mother cannot care for her, as a tiny baby makes a stir. A loving mother will sign papers that will cut like a knife, making a decision effecting her and a new life. This is all out of her control, a mother with fear in her body and soul. As her body now shakes, she must sign the papers even if her heart breaks. Her loving tiny girl lays in a pretty pink blanket all wrapped, a mother can not abandon her or have her kidnapped. Will the true story ever be known, about a mother filled with love but on her own. A baby that came from heaven above, and about a price one put on selfless love.

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Date: 5/27/2025 4:29:00 AM
I can't imagine how hard giving up a child must be for most mothers who are not prepared to rear that child. Doing the right thing for the child's well-fair has to be so hard. The love it takes to do the right thing for the child grips the soul. Thanks for sharing this winner with us. Congratulations on the winner. Way to go. Sara K
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/29/2025 12:43:00 PM
Thanks for reading, writing and for your Congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my "Do Not Abandon Me" write. It is all about her love for her baby. It must be a very hard thing to do. Have a blessed day writing away.........
Date: 5/24/2025 10:49:00 AM
Wonderfully crafted poem with fantastic and deep metaphorical layers, congratulations on your well deserved win, Paula
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/25/2025 8:57:00 AM
Thanks for reading, writing and for your Congratulations. Your kind words put a smile on my heart. Glad you enjoyed my "Do Not Abandon Me" write. It is all about her love for her baby. Have a blessed weekend writing away.........
Date: 5/24/2025 10:37:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest "Abandon", Paula :) - hugs
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/25/2025 8:55:00 AM
Thanks for reading, writing and for your Congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my "Do Not Abandon Me" write. It is all about love. Hugs... Have a blessed weekend writing away.......
Date: 5/24/2025 8:26:00 AM
"2 Place" Do Not Abandon Me ~ Date Written:5/18/2025 ~ Written By Human Poet ~ Not A True Story.
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Date: 5/23/2025 3:16:00 PM
Congratulations on your win for this touching write!
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/24/2025 8:25:00 AM
Thanks for reading, writing and for your Congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my "Do Not Abandon Me" write. It is all about love. Have a blessed weekend writing away.........
Date: 5/23/2025 1:07:00 AM
Love brought her to light, and sometimes it is the love that signs the papers to allow her to have the hope of a better life. So very sad, but so very loving despite her breaking heart. Beautifully written Paula <3
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/24/2025 8:24:00 AM
Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you found my "Do Not Abandon Me" to be, Beautifully written. It must be hard on the mother and child. It is all about love. Have a blessed day writing away.............
Date: 5/22/2025 10:18:00 AM
Maybe not true, but you did such a good job of describing it. And it happens way too often. It's hard to imagine the pain.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/24/2025 8:22:00 AM
Thanks for reading and writing. Glad you enjoyed my "Do Not Abandon Me" write. Yes, it does happen. It is so sad for all. Have a blessed weekend writing away.........
Date: 5/19/2025 9:49:00 PM
It's a heart breaking decision to hand over her baby to another through legal formalities. She signs the documents broken hearted, but she has to do it out of sheer necessity. I know one such mother and she still grieves. A heart touching poem, dear Paula.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/20/2025 10:48:00 AM
Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you found my "Do Not Abandon Me" to be, A heart touching poem. It must be hard on the mother and child. Have a blessed day writing away.............
Date: 5/19/2025 2:10:00 AM
- A heartbreaking poem, Paula... a mother will never forget her child... a difficult choice to make - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/19/2025 7:59:00 AM
Thanks for reading, writing and for your Best wishes in the contest. Glad you found my "Do Not Abandon Me" to be, A heartbreaking poem. Guess this is hard on everyone. Have a blessed day/week writing away.............
Date: 5/18/2025 11:22:00 PM
I really like your approach here to the contest theme, Paula. Well done.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/19/2025 7:56:00 AM
Thanks for reading and writing. Glad you found my "Do Not Abandon Me" to be, Well done. Have a blessed day/week writing away.............
Date: 5/18/2025 2:24:00 PM
That gift will be given a loving and safe home. Often these parents can’t have kids of their own…yet they become theirs. Not easy for the mother, the child or the new parents. The kid might spend more time wondering who their mother is and the parents fearful because the child in the end might leave them Still, life is filled with these struggles and at least for now they have warmth, love, security.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/19/2025 7:55:00 AM
Thanks for reading and writing. Glad you enjoyed my "Do Not Abandon Me" write. I guess this is hard on everyone. Have a blessed day/week writing away.........
Date: 5/18/2025 10:11:00 AM
Do Not Abandon Me ~ Date Written:5/18/2025 ~ Written By Human Poet ~ Not A True Story.
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