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Do Mind the Wet Paint

My mind is a very active place. Like for all people, the number of its rooms is limitless, for the mind travels to many places as well as traveling via novels and movies, so those rooms are ever-changing. They are decorated automatically. You need not lift a finger to decorate them! One room different from the ever-changing ones is my attic. Perhaps for unluckier souls this room could be a basement or a dungeon! In my attic are mostly memories which, for me, are beautifully colored. Nostalgia floods its very broad expanse and drips into every nook and cranny. The main room of my mind is the living room. This is like the living room of my friends' minds, the common room where our thinking dictates what lies inside it and how those thoughts are perceived by others. I like to think my living room is unique, but also I know it's filled with too much clutter! The room most interesting of all my rooms would be the room of my imagination. In this room are thousands upon thousands of closets, cabinets, and shelves, and inside each one are different pieces of my imagination! Each cabinet is organized by type. Some are surreal in color or vivid technicolor! Those pieces are my dreams. My fantasies are closeted. The ones made manifest on paper or computer are sitting out on shelves! All the ones which can be seen are those I call my poems or stories. Most are not dark in color but are bright or multi-colored. I decorate the room of my imagination often. You may come and see my new shelves at any time! Do mind the wet paint. I'm never finished adding to that room! Feb. 26, 2018 (my only free verse for this year so far!) Inspired by another contest but too long for that one. For John Hamilton's Best Free Verse of 2018 Contest

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Date: 3/19/2018 8:51:00 PM
What an imagination you have!! Enjoyed the tour. Your creativity is boundless it seems.
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Date: 3/4/2018 8:18:00 PM
Absolutely imaginative and impressive Andrea. Your beautiful poem illustrates the multi-faceted aspects of how life is represented in your mind. Intriguing and enchanting. Congratulations on your wonderful win!
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Date: 3/3/2018 1:49:00 PM
Marvelously delightful poem, Andrea. Congrats on your well deserved win.
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Date: 3/1/2018 7:46:00 PM
And what a mind you have dear sis.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 3/1/2018 8:43:00 PM
thanks for being my best support ever, Jenny. To use this in the contest of this title, I need to take just the last stanza and repost that part. I did not notice the 20 line limit when I started this one!!
Date: 2/27/2018 9:59:00 AM
Really interesting metaphor Andrea, somehow I thought this was Constance's write, interesting when judging blind what you think, congrats in placing in my contest, did you see the winners? mind blowing poetry!
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Date: 2/27/2018 5:02:00 AM
Great use of metaphor, great imagination and creativity..
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Date: 2/27/2018 2:51:00 AM
This is a good presentation of the human mind. This is a creative piece from the room of imagination
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Date: 2/26/2018 8:03:00 PM
Such a rich a interesting home you have in that head of yours, Andrea. Very talented for sure.
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Date: 2/26/2018 8:01:00 PM
I like it...It explains a lot...How multidimensional we can be and are...walking down the corridors of our minds...All the best Andrea
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Date: 2/26/2018 5:22:00 PM
Wow! Andrea, This was so clever and creative . Your imagination served you well in this piece. The rooms of your "mind" are amazing. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
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Date: 2/26/2018 5:12:00 PM
I admire your imagination in this poem, Andrea..quite unique! Well articulated by a mind with limitless rooms!
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Date: 2/26/2018 5:12:00 PM
Creative imaginative and the way all your rooms seem so organized, I'm jealous, my minds a mess...good luck
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 2/26/2018 6:26:00 PM
oh but didn't you see the part where I said my "Living" area is cluttery!! And the physical one is as well!!
Date: 2/26/2018 4:47:00 PM
Love the analogy Andrea. Great to be able to read you again
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Date: 2/26/2018 4:45:00 PM
I think the adverts have cleaned themselves up. I'm able to read again. Let me read your poem : ))
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Date: 2/26/2018 4:28:00 PM
Wow, what a great verse Andrea. Your so right as we go through life we keep on having to upsize to store it all. Good luck on the contest. Tom
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Date: 2/26/2018 4:26:00 PM
May your paint never dry and your ink continue to run! Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/26/2018 4:24:00 PM
I love your double storey house, your three car garage, and i love the mood that created this sublime poetry..its always wet there, tears i wonder, wow what are you saying Andrea?
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