Do Mind the Wet Paint

My mind is a very active place.
Like for all people,
the number of its rooms is limitless,
for the mind travels to many places
as well as traveling via novels and movies, 
so those rooms are ever-changing.
They are decorated automatically.
You need not lift a finger to decorate them!

One room different from the ever-changing ones
is my attic. Perhaps for unluckier souls
this room could be a basement or a dungeon!
In my attic are mostly memories which, 
for me, are beautifully colored.
Nostalgia floods its very broad expanse
and drips into every nook and cranny.

The main room of my mind
is the living room.
This is like the living room of my friends' minds,
the common room where our thinking dictates
what lies inside it and how those thoughts 
are perceived by others.
I like to think my living room is unique,
but also I know it's filled with too much clutter! 

The room most interesting of all my rooms
would be the room of my imagination.
In this room are thousands upon thousands
of closets, cabinets, and shelves,
and inside each one are different pieces of
my imagination!
Each cabinet is organized by type.
Some are surreal in color or vivid technicolor!
Those pieces are my dreams.
My fantasies are closeted.
The ones made manifest on paper or computer
are sitting out on shelves!

All the ones which can be seen 
are those I call my poems or stories.
Most are not dark in color
but are bright or multi-colored.
I decorate the room of my imagination often.
You may come and see my new shelves
at any time!
Do mind the wet paint. 
I'm never finished adding to that room!

 Feb. 26, 2018 (my only free verse for this year so far!)
Inspired by another contest but too long for that one. 
 For John Hamilton's Best Free Verse of 2018 Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gentry Avatar
March 19, 2018 at 8:51 PM
What an imagination you have!! Enjoyed the tour. Your creativity is boundless it seems.
Ashley Avatar
March 4, 2018 at 8:18 PM
Absolutely imaginative and impressive Andrea. Your beautiful poem illustrates the multi-faceted aspects of how life is represented in your mind. Intriguing and enchanting. Congratulations on your wonderful win!
Gauthier Avatar
March 3, 2018 at 1:49 PM
Marvelously delightful poem, Andrea. Congrats on your well deserved win.
Walker Avatar
March 1, 2018 at 7:46 PM
And what a mind you have dear sis.
Dietrich Avatar
March 1, 2018 at 8:43 PM
thanks for being my best support ever, Jenny. To use this in the contest of this title, I need to take just the last stanza and repost that part. I did not notice the 20 line limit when I started this one!!
Hamilton Avatar
February 27, 2018 at 9:59 AM
Really interesting metaphor Andrea, somehow I thought this was Constance's write, interesting when judging blind what you think, congrats in placing in my contest, did you see the winners? mind blowing poetry!
One Avatar
February 27, 2018 at 5:02 AM
Great use of metaphor, great imagination and creativity..
Oimbo Avatar
February 27, 2018 at 2:51 AM
This is a good presentation of the human mind. This is a creative piece from the room of imagination
Duet Avatar
February 26, 2018 at 8:03 PM
Such a rich a interesting home you have in that head of yours, Andrea. Very talented for sure.
Michael Avatar
February 26, 2018 at 8:01 PM
I like it...It explains a lot...How multidimensional we can be and are...walking down the corridors of our minds...All the best Andrea
Y. Avatar
February 26, 2018 at 5:22 PM
Wow! Andrea, This was so clever and creative . Your imagination served you well in this piece. The rooms of your "mind" are amazing. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
Pandit Avatar
February 26, 2018 at 5:12 PM
I admire your imagination in this poem, Andrea..quite unique! Well articulated by a mind with limitless rooms!
Parker Avatar
February 26, 2018 at 5:12 PM
Creative imaginative and the way all your rooms seem so organized, I'm jealous, my minds a mess...good luck
Dietrich Avatar
February 26, 2018 at 6:26 PM
oh but didn't you see the part where I said my "Living" area is cluttery!! And the physical one is as well!!
Smith Avatar
February 26, 2018 at 4:47 PM
Love the analogy Andrea. Great to be able to read you again
Smith Avatar
February 26, 2018 at 4:45 PM
I think the adverts have cleaned themselves up. I'm able to read again. Let me read your poem : ))
Cunningham Avatar
February 26, 2018 at 4:28 PM
Wow, what a great verse Andrea. Your so right as we go through life we keep on having to upsize to store it all. Good luck on the contest. Tom
Allison Avatar
February 26, 2018 at 4:26 PM
May your paint never dry and your ink continue to run! Hugs Jan xx
Horsman Avatar
February 26, 2018 at 4:24 PM
I love your double storey house, your three car garage, and i love the mood that created this sublime poetry..its always wet there, tears i wonder, wow what are you saying Andrea?
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