Do Ghosts Make Love

They felt elated, walking 
on the grainy golden sand,
Hand in hand occasionally 
Stealing a passionate kiss.
The evening’s first star shone
So luminous and bright.
The sea was so calm that night.
Little did they know 
What was to befall them!
They found a secluded cove.
Love was abundant all around,
Until the earth shook in a quake.
Large tsunami waves 
Carried them to their demise.

The ambulance came.  
The nurses identified the corpses.
There they were on the beach
Still in a sweet embrace.
Must have been that freak tsunami
Someone wise said.
Another asked cynically.
Do ghosts still make love?
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George Avatar
October 1, 2023 at 5:50 AM
I see romance ad humour coupling together in this poem ! You bring some extra terrestrial elements to your poems which give a special appeal. I wonder how I missed this. Sad, the ghosts got drowned during their love making ! :)
Daisy Silk Avatar
September 7, 2023 at 8:57 PM
Intriguing and gripping story, your flow of words had me on my toes. A tragic end for these lovers but your left with an extraordinary question. Love it.
Tor Avatar
August 30, 2023 at 2:59 AM
Great question in this one Victor the ending was was witty and clever. You had me from the begining my friend well written...
Kiser Avatar
August 22, 2023 at 12:38 PM
Wow, powerful imagery in this piece. Well done!
Fowler Avatar
August 16, 2023 at 3:56 PM
Enough they died embracing one another as they slip from one plane to another. A sweet, romantic write so common with you. I love it! :)
Goldsmith Avatar
August 15, 2023 at 9:29 AM
A fun/creative ~ write/story. I really enjoyed it. Next time you see a ghost, ask them. Hahaha!!! You are a wonderful writer. Have a great/blessed day writing away.....................
Bayles Avatar
August 2, 2023 at 7:47 AM
Victor, another poem of yours with great romance. But at the end there is a nice twist, Endless love.
Seeker Avatar
July 25, 2023 at 5:00 AM
Thay do if stuck between realms, as mediums tell us. Enjoyed the imaginative write, Victor.
Messina Avatar
July 24, 2023 at 3:44 AM
A thought to ponder. No need for sheets on the bed (lol) Hope you are feeling better, Victor. Blessings and prayers my friend.
Legros Kelley Avatar
July 23, 2023 at 1:16 AM
Souls intwined in love, but death cannot kill love. So, yes, in a way, I believe their spirits still love and comfort one another, not in the physical sense. Loves embrace must be eternal...forever. This is so sad, and yet beautiful, tragic, but an honest question certainly does make one ponder.
Gasun Avatar
July 22, 2023 at 8:15 PM
So romantic and beautiful although tragic ending, making a superb poem and story. I enjoyed your poem and the last line makes me think too much. Thanks a lot for sharing and for the visits on my poems my dearest poet friernd. I'm a mushroom here at PS because of the load of work everyday. So meantime this is my resthouse as mother nature allows me sometimes. God bless you always and again, thank you so much. I'll be back soon to read more if its fine with you ok. Hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
July 16, 2023 at 7:52 PM
A crazy tale…a dark romantic one!
Roper Avatar
July 14, 2023 at 4:44 PM
Always a thought I too wondered. Great story . I hope you are doing better
Buhagiar Avatar
July 15, 2023 at 7:32 AM
No
Dietrich Avatar
July 14, 2023 at 4:39 PM
they can FEEL like it, that's what I would suppose. Very interesting one, Victor
Situation Avatar
July 14, 2023 at 4:33 PM
They can't eat... So No.
Daniel Avatar
July 14, 2023 at 1:54 AM
A tale of love and some questions to ponder, Victor:) great write:)
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 13, 2023 at 2:56 PM
Hello Victor, I do think we will never know. Enjoy your evening my friend. Yet it is something to ponder. Enjoy your evening my friend./Darlene\
Gentile Avatar
July 13, 2023 at 7:14 AM
What an interesting thought Victor! I sure hope they do! A lovely and romantic piece you have crafted! Happy Thursday !
Edmonds  Avatar
July 12, 2023 at 6:34 PM
Perhaps ghosts do make love, heaven knows. A sad story/poem but an interesting read… Belle
Rose  Avatar
July 12, 2023 at 6:30 PM
that is a good question, maybe from their place of heaven they do, :)
Buehler Avatar
July 12, 2023 at 6:02 PM
Too bad the sweet romance ended so tragically. Love your storytelling, Victor.
Pandit Avatar
July 12, 2023 at 1:55 PM
They embraced in fear of storm. Seeking comfort in each other's arms.
Andresen Avatar
July 12, 2023 at 1:04 PM
- Your question at the end ... I can't wait to see what answer you get ... I have no answer to give you ... great writing, Victor - hugs
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