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Do As I Do, Dear

(I did not capitalize all the words in the titles of the poet's poems because I wanted the sentences to appear normal, but of course quotes are used to show Anitha's titles) “When your eyes locked with mine,” you came to the “window of my verse.” My dear, can’t you see “I am life – I am you?” Together as one, we can be the universe! Through “waves” of “clouds, let’s you and I “fly high.” In your “breezy embrace” I shall soar within “the throb of silence” of spacious azure sky. Yes, “silence” like that which comes “after a summer rain!” Oh, you, of “irresistable charm” - “ink of my eye” - come paint with me a “rainbow” once again. “A drizzle of memories” May’s showers left behind. Though they gave me “just a glimpse of you,” “irreplaceable” now are the “treasures” in you I find. As we go drifting back down to earth, let us “welcome spring.” “Embracing a magical moment,” we hear “a melodious symphony.” Birds start to sing. Their “music” is “in admiration” of you. “Can you imagine?” Please know they are “waiting for light,” and YOU are the light, so “smile,” and do as I do, Dear. “Bask in your own glow.” May 24, 2021 for the Title Wave Poetry Contest of Richard Lamoureux (I based this poem on titles from the poetry page of Anitha Jayasankar, my newest sweet friend from India here on PoetrySoup. I invite you to visit Anitha if you have not met her yet!)

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Date: 6/29/2021 10:48:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Cheers to you and Ani! God bless you.
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Date: 6/29/2021 10:33:00 AM
Andrea, congratulations on your win in the contest with this beautiful tribute to Ani, love and serenity _Constance
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Date: 6/29/2021 9:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your top win Andrea and tribute to Ani! You have captured her spirit well. She is a very sweet lady and a wonderful addition to PS. Congratulations to both of you.
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Date: 6/29/2021 9:45:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful story/write. Enjoy your win with blessings...........................
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Date: 6/29/2021 5:07:00 AM
Fantastic poem, well deserved top win, Andrea! Keep the inspirations flowing
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Date: 6/29/2021 2:48:00 AM
Dear Ria, I have no words to express my gratitude for YOU choosing my poem titles among the so many wonderful poets here on Soup. I admire all those wonderful poets here on Soup, and will be reading more of their poems soon. Recently, I haven't been able to be active on Soup due to various personal reasons. Will be back soon, posting poems. THANK YOU so much... Hearty congrats on your TOP win. Hugs... ~ Ani
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Date: 6/29/2021 2:09:00 AM
You being a master, I think, you can make the toughest themes easy.
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Date: 6/28/2021 11:13:00 PM
A difficult assignment made easy by one of the finest poets on Soup, congrats for a top win
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Date: 6/28/2021 9:58:00 PM
Congratulations on your 1st place win, Andrea. I admire how you managed to incorporate rhyme in this difficult assignment to achieve a stunning poem. Regards, Suzette
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Date: 6/28/2021 4:58:00 PM
Ani is a wonderful talent on soup so glad you honoured her with this tribute:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 6/28/2021 2:59:00 PM
Congratulations , Andrea, on your win. Great tribute to Anitha titles.
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Date: 6/28/2021 1:15:00 PM
You orchestrated this beautifully. Congrats on your top win. Hugs Rick/
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/28/2021 1:41:00 PM
wow, thanks so much for the good placement with this one Anitha will be so happy too!
Date: 6/4/2021 2:19:00 PM
a lovelythoughtful write - thanks very much for the kind message on my birthday blog - so sorry I've only just seen it
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Date: 5/25/2021 5:58:00 PM
Well done Andrea. A wonderful way to honor a new friend. God Bless, JB
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Date: 5/25/2021 9:32:00 AM
Oh wow Andrea... What a pleasant surprise... I didn't expect this... my sweet friend... THANK you so much and felt so happy reading this poem with my poem titles...How can I not fav this? Thank you again Andrea...Love and hugs ~ Ani
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Date: 5/25/2021 5:28:00 AM
Beautiful honouring poem once again, Andrea:) I may just stop by her page:)
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Date: 5/24/2021 11:16:00 PM
Love how you connect and bring forth such meaningful poetry.
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Date: 5/24/2021 10:47:00 PM
I've read some of these poems. Ani is a great poet though she often forget me.
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Date: 5/24/2021 10:44:00 PM
Hi Andrea, You did a great job using Anitha’s poem titles. I am familiar with her work; she's awesome. Best wishes in the contest:-) Alexis
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Date: 5/24/2021 10:27:00 PM
Wonderful as always.
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Date: 5/24/2021 6:35:00 PM
Beautiful work, Andrea. "Bask in your own glow." I loved it.
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Date: 5/24/2021 6:33:00 PM
Love the final verse! So pretty!
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Date: 5/24/2021 5:48:00 PM
Very clever my friend. A challenging way to write a poem. Too hard for me. Well penned. Have a great day.
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