Dizzy Took a Walk

He was born Desmond
back in the hollers
Pa did it all
For a few dollars

They called him Desi
But that one was took
Changed it to Dizzy
A lesser known hook

He grew quick and strong
And agile to boot
His Pa ran a still
That garnered the loot

Dizzy had talent
At making the brew
He sampled it himself
Each hour or two

So he grew up loose
And limber they say
He could dance the day
And the night away

He got sick one month
With shivers and tears
Found out with surprise 
He'd been drunk for years

So when he got well
He just took a walk
He somehow stayed loose
And that boy could talk

He danced and he talked
For twenty some years
Sober as a judge
And empty of fears

If you should see him
Somewhere down the road
The Holler says, "Hey,
Keep totin' that load"


8-21-19
Contest: Bring a character to life
Sponsor" Richard Lamoureux
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Drowley Avatar
September 9, 2019 at 4:00 PM
'Larry, Congratulations on your win. You really brought Dizzy to life! David'
Hamilton Avatar
September 8, 2019 at 10:49 PM
Well done Larry good for top spot, way to go!
Bradfield Avatar
September 9, 2019 at 7:43 AM
Thanks, John
Lamoureux Avatar
September 8, 2019 at 9:04 AM
My pleasure, do drop by for a visit.
Mcgee Avatar
September 8, 2019 at 7:56 AM
Love your character Dizzy. congratulations on your top placement.
Bradfield Avatar
September 9, 2019 at 7:43 AM
Thank you, Jeanne
Mcintosh Avatar
September 8, 2019 at 6:16 AM
I just love your portrayal of the character. I'm glad you placed so highly. A great poem. Congratulations, Thanks and blessings.
Bradfield Avatar
September 9, 2019 at 7:42 AM
Thank you, Regina!
Lamoureux Avatar
September 8, 2019 at 12:36 AM
Great entry, you brought Dizzy to life. Congrats on your top placement. Thanks for entering my contest.
Bradfield Avatar
September 8, 2019 at 12:48 AM
Thank you Richard! Wasn't expecting the top spot...how exciting. It was a fun contest..Thank you for sponsoring...Larry
Ravidas Avatar
September 7, 2019 at 4:20 PM
"Alive, little devil", his old black nanny said, meeting him at Walmart) Dizzy's so real. Congrats, Larry. Perfect gold.
Bradfield Avatar
September 7, 2019 at 9:03 PM
Thank you kindly, Kurt
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