Dizzy Goodfellow's White Horse

He came from the Dust Bowl in a terrible time
When his family were stricken with broken, dirt covered dreams.
The patchwork wooden shack they slept and ate in had all but tumbled
To a fate no one could repair or even had the desire to.
No crops, no means to grow anything to eat
In this sterile, fruitless, barren land they called home-
A time when the only thing farmers could harvest was your dreams.
There was very little left in his world except suffering.
He was a good boy like his name, and a small boy, not born that way, 
But fashioned by his lack of sustenance.
His life was laden with monumental emptiness and boredom
Enduringly waiting for better things to come.
He would make his own toys to play with
Out of anything that was some sort of surplus in his world of poverty.
And when he had nothing more except himself,
His idleness was spent by creating a circle dance-
A spiral game, to turn his spirit into a liberation to his salvation.
Singing a song he would bring his feet together to shuffle side by side
While creating his whirling motion like an old "spinning top" he used to have.
Round and round he would turn until he could turn no more
To finally stop as if some invisible force straight up and grabbed him.
His world spun around him, magically becoming a carousel
Where he heard music, laughter and felt giddy happiness
As he rode on the great white horse of his choice
Traveling with this bright and joyous carnival fancy
Taking him to a place where hardship lost its meaning.
He would perform his dance time after time
No one ever really cared about it, 
After all what was a young restless boy to do?

They never called him by his real name - Johnny Goodfellow
They always called him "Dizzy"
A name that would stick with him his entire long-lived life,
And follow him on a distant road of misadventure
Hard work, uninviting places, and downright unfriendly folks.......
But it didn't matter - he had learned early how to make his world alright  



September 2, 2019
"Bring a Character to Life" Poetry Contest
Sponsored by:  Richard Lamoureux
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Hamilton Avatar
September 8, 2019 at 10:46 PM
This is really well written I could picture that sad little boy and relate somewhat, I used to play with some string when a boy, interesting what a little boy's imagination can come up with, congrats on a top win!
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September 8, 2019 at 9:06 AM
You are welcome. Do drop by for a visit.
Mcgee Avatar
September 8, 2019 at 8:03 AM
A great story Lonna. Congrats on your win.
Lamoureux Avatar
September 8, 2019 at 12:42 AM
Congrats on your placement in my contest. You put a lot of thought into this piece. Thanks for entering my contest.
Blodgett Avatar
September 8, 2019 at 12:57 AM
Thank you again Richard. Appreciate the fun challenge in developing a character with regard to his origins. Looking forward to the next contest. Lonna
Mcintosh Avatar
September 2, 2019 at 11:03 PM
Interesting character. I hope you do well in the contest and happy writing. Blessings.
Blodgett Avatar
September 3, 2019 at 9:09 AM
Thank you Regina. It was a fun write.
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