Dizzy

set up for failure as plans revolve around me like planets never staying in place moving with momentum too fast to catch up out of breath i can’t breathe for i think of life and death want to catch all life brings the pedal pushed to the floor accelerating and the puppies that want to push me out of first place and i must yield to win the race with my God 2/27/2018

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Dale Gregory Cozart

Date: 2/27/2018 2:52:00 PM

I remember all the songs from your 70's poem. This title, "Dizzy", was a song by Tommy Roe in the late sixties and the first 45 I ever bought.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/27/2018 4:53:00 PM

Awesome, Dale! Glad it triggered a memory :) Kim

Jack Ellison

Date: 2/27/2018 9:25:00 AM

Brilliant!!!!!! Let's dance in the street together, I'll even throw away my cane!!! YEEHAW!!! Lovesies, Happy Jack xoxox

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/27/2018 10:16:00 AM

Thanks for the chuckle this morning! Throw the cane to the wind my good fellow! <3 Kim

Line Gauthier

Date: 2/27/2018 8:51:00 AM

Great reminder that we do need reminders to breathe and refocus. Well done, Kim.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/27/2018 8:53:00 AM

Thanks, Line! We all feel so deeply. We will always have human emotions but must refocus as you say.