Wilma Neels Poet Light Verse

'divorce Society'

~Haiku~

your love flew away 
like a migrating bird
and never came back...

~Limerick~

Your lack of love pushed me to the floor
I couldn’t take it anymore
I signed on the dotted line
You were no longer mine
Why don’t you just hit the door?

~Couplet~

We entered into a partnership
Six months down the line you decided to jump ship


7th place
Contest: Divorse Club
Sponsor: PD

© November 2010

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Michael J. Falotico December 2, 2010 at 3:04 PM Nicely done my sweet dear poet friend... a winner from the moment it left your mind...congrats my partner in crime...love Michael

Dr.Ram Mehta December 2, 2010 at 12:53 PM Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest, Wilma

Sheri Fresonke Harper December 2, 2010 at 9:12 AM Ow, it sounded so sweet, shows divorce so quick really hurts, enjoyed it, congrats on your win:)

Poet Destroyer A December 2, 2010 at 7:09 AM Good Morning, Wilma) Congratulations! With your awesome 3some of 3 differ forms. I had lots of fun reading every entry. I was surprised every one pulled off a beautiful and amazing Job to my request. lol,, and the whole time I thought it was going to be a tough contest,...p.d.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart December 2, 2010 at 6:34 AM Congrats dear Wilma my friend on your big win in P.D.'s great contest with this brilliant write and entry luv.. enjoy another top ten win today with lots of luv...

Carol Sunshine Brown December 2, 2010 at 5:54 AM Congratulations Wilma for your win in P.D.'s "Divorce Club Contest". Love, Carol

Charles Melody Lightning Ink November 29, 2010 at 1:27 AM beautiful set ups, Wilma, i love these poems because they are well written.

Sheri Fresonke Harper November 28, 2010 at 9:34 PM Ouch, it started out so serene but unloads as you read, excellent work:)

Andrea Dietrich November 28, 2010 at 1:05 AM Cool poems. That was funny, partnership changing for "jump ship!" Good luck in the contest. Luv, Andrea

Daver Austin November 27, 2010 at 6:28 AM BUMMER, Wilma! "Why don't you just hit the door." I love that line. Shows good self-respect. Love, Dave

Audrey Haick November 26, 2010 at 7:34 PM Love these three that make up your entry for the contest, Wilma.. Great job...I enjoyed the humor in all three forms.. Love, Audrey

Duncan Chappell November 26, 2010 at 6:02 PM nice piece my friend

Carolyn Devonshire November 26, 2010 at 10:47 AM Excellent, Wilma! Witty and to the point. Marriages here often last only a few months before someone "jumps ship." And if he pushed you to the floor, shove him out the door! Best wishes in the contest with this great series. Love, Carolyn

Sharon Ruebel November 26, 2010 at 10:43 AM Hello Wilma, Very well done, all three Thank you for stopping by to see me. Your kind words mean a lot. Seems we may have something in common. Have a beautiful weekend. As Always, Shar

Barbara Gorelick November 26, 2010 at 6:32 AM You just keep getting better and better..love it. BG

Hathor Ammutlinra November 26, 2010 at 5:22 AM Good morning, Wilma your haiku flew away with my thoughts. I agree with Michael, a sure winner'(LIN~RA)

Michael J. Falotico November 26, 2010 at 4:06 AM Have tosay my fav. is the Haiku and the rest just fall into place... a winner my Partner in crime who Im still thinking of dressed as a nurse lol enjoyed this entry my dear...with love Michael

Nette Onclaud November 26, 2010 at 12:18 AM reminds me of the phrase "his loss, your gain," wilma... an array of beautiful well sewn together.. best of luck in the contest.. i just did my piece too minutes ago! warmest, nenette