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'divorce Society'

~Haiku~

your love flew away 
like a migrating bird
and never came back...

~Limerick~

Your lack of love pushed me to the floor
I couldn’t take it anymore
I signed on the dotted line
You were no longer mine
Why don’t you just hit the door?

~Couplet~

We entered into a partnership
Six months down the line you decided to jump ship


7th place
Contest: Divorse Club
Sponsor: PD

© November 2010

Copyright © Wilma Neels | Year Posted 2010

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Michael J. Falotico Date: 12/2/2010 3:04:00 PM Nicely done my sweet dear poet friend... a winner from the moment it left your mind...congrats my partner in crime...love Michael Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 12/2/2010 12:53:00 PM Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest, Wilma Login to Reply

Sheri Fresonke Harper Date: 12/2/2010 9:12:00 AM Ow, it sounded so sweet, shows divorce so quick really hurts, enjoyed it, congrats on your win:) Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 12/2/2010 7:09:00 AM Good Morning, Wilma) Congratulations! With your awesome 3some of 3 differ forms. I had lots of fun reading every entry. I was surprised every one pulled off a beautiful and amazing Job to my request. lol,, and the whole time I thought it was going to be a tough contest,...p.d. Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 12/2/2010 6:34:00 AM Congrats dear Wilma my friend on your big win in P.D.'s great contest with this brilliant write and entry luv.. enjoy another top ten win today with lots of luv... Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 12/2/2010 5:54:00 AM Congratulations Wilma for your win in P.D.'s "Divorce Club Contest". Love, Carol Login to Reply

Charles Melody Lightning Ink Date: 11/29/2010 1:27:00 AM beautiful set ups, Wilma, i love these poems because they are well written. Login to Reply

Sheri Fresonke Harper Date: 11/28/2010 9:34:00 PM Ouch, it started out so serene but unloads as you read, excellent work:) Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 11/28/2010 1:05:00 AM Cool poems. That was funny, partnership changing for "jump ship!" Good luck in the contest. Luv, Andrea Login to Reply

Daver Austin Date: 11/27/2010 6:28:00 AM BUMMER, Wilma! "Why don't you just hit the door." I love that line. Shows good self-respect. Love, Dave Login to Reply

Audrey Haick Date: 11/26/2010 7:34:00 PM Love these three that make up your entry for the contest, Wilma.. Great job...I enjoyed the humor in all three forms.. Love, Audrey Login to Reply

Duncan Chappell Date: 11/26/2010 6:02:00 PM nice piece my friend Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 11/26/2010 10:47:00 AM Excellent, Wilma! Witty and to the point. Marriages here often last only a few months before someone "jumps ship." And if he pushed you to the floor, shove him out the door! Best wishes in the contest with this great series. Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Sharon Ruebel Date: 11/26/2010 10:43:00 AM Hello Wilma, Very well done, all three Thank you for stopping by to see me. Your kind words mean a lot. Seems we may have something in common. Have a beautiful weekend. As Always, Shar Login to Reply

Barbara Gorelick Date: 11/26/2010 6:32:00 AM You just keep getting better and better..love it. BG Login to Reply

Hathor Ammutlinra Date: 11/26/2010 5:22:00 AM Good morning, Wilma your haiku flew away with my thoughts. I agree with Michael, a sure winner'(LIN~RA) Login to Reply

Michael J. Falotico Date: 11/26/2010 4:06:00 AM Have tosay my fav. is the Haiku and the rest just fall into place... a winner my Partner in crime who Im still thinking of dressed as a nurse lol enjoyed this entry my dear...with love Michael Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 11/26/2010 12:18:00 AM reminds me of the phrase "his loss, your gain," wilma... an array of beautiful well sewn together.. best of luck in the contest.. i just did my piece too minutes ago! warmest, nenette Login to Reply