Tahera Mannan Poet Limerick

Divorce Fuss

Haiku
That evil Sunday
A downpour of sadness from the sky
We went separate ways

Limerick
The bright Friday of thirteen
I married him in my teen
And in twenties decided to part
For he drank like a silly wart
This saved some damage to my spleen

Couplet
Marriage is the name of a see-saw
And divorce is its major flaw

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Adell Foster December 4, 2010 at 6:19 AM Congrats on your well deserved win Tahera I truly enjoyed the read ;-) Many Blessings, Always, Adell

Linda Milgate December 3, 2010 at 7:28 PM Your couplet, my favorite. Good job.

Marilyn Hernandez December 2, 2010 at 3:13 PM Congrats on your win! Yours is one of my favorites!

Michael J. Falotico December 2, 2010 at 2:48 PM Congrats to you too... what a great write you have done...love Michael

Dr.Ram Mehta December 2, 2010 at 12:39 PM Congratulations on this high place win in the contest, Tahera

Sheri Fresonke Harper December 2, 2010 at 8:53 AM Very awesome couplet to end this well put together set, enjoyed it. Congrats on your win:)

Poet Destroyer A December 2, 2010 at 6:54 AM Tahera) Congratulations! With your awesome 3some of 3 differ forms. I had lots of fun reading every entry. I was surprised every one pulled off a beautiful and amazing Job to my request. lol,, and the whole time I thought it was going to be a tough contest,...p.d.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart December 2, 2010 at 6:21 AM Congrats Tahera my sweet friend on your big win in P.D.'s divorce contest with this brilliant entry luv.. enjoy your top spot on the winners list today with luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown December 2, 2010 at 5:47 AM Congratulations Tahera for your win in P.D.'s "Divorce Club Contest". Love, Carol

Adell Foster November 29, 2010 at 6:37 PM Tahera, the emotions are very well conveyed within the lines of this well written trio , I truly enjoyed the read. ;-) Good Luck in the contest ~ Adell

Skat A November 25, 2010 at 7:59 PM WOW! I LOVE LL 3 GOOD LUCK,, best holiday wishes*Luv~Skat

Diane Locksley November 24, 2010 at 1:03 PM Wow, this is awesome, Tahera. The first verse is so sad, but the other two are really funny. Good luck in the divorce club contest. Best to you, Diane

Carolyn Devonshire November 24, 2010 at 11:37 AM Wow! I really love these poems, Tahera. You managed to find humor in divorce with your funny limerick and couplet. The haiku is a good description of how divorce must feel to people who thought they would spend their lives together. Excellent writing, my friend. Wishing you peace and love, Carolyn

Kabuteng P.Ink K. November 23, 2010 at 10:52 PM Clever thoughts you put in here, Tahera! I have to agree with Andrea over what I liked best in your entry-- :) -- wish you the best!-- nikko :)

Andrea Dietrich November 23, 2010 at 7:03 PM My fav was the couplet and the last line of the limerick. That rocked! Good luck in the contest. Clever of you to do it this way. I think I will try to do the humorous approach as well. LUv Andrea

Harry Horsman November 23, 2010 at 3:50 PM this is so good,yet heaps of sadness in there. Harry

Dr.Ram Mehta November 23, 2010 at 1:18 PM Nice thoughts with humor and quite frolicsome, Good luck in the contest, tahera

Linda-Marie Sweetheart November 23, 2010 at 5:32 AM Again a brilliant write and contest entry Tahera.. am working on mine today ..thankxxx for your prayers for my Ron.. we will wait and see.. appreciate..my friend.. good luck in P.D.'s new contest.. this one is a sure winner list competitor.. luv..

Anna-Marie Docherty November 23, 2010 at 12:07 AM Love the diversity in this writing. The use of several forms works well for the subject concerned. My heart goes out to you if it is your current situation... Kindest thoughts and good luck, Anna-Marie.

Francine Roberts November 22, 2010 at 10:51 PM really cute one, good luck in the contest with this witty entry

Betty Johnson November 22, 2010 at 9:23 PM I hear ya, nice job.

Audrey Haick November 22, 2010 at 9:08 PM If this is for a contest, Tahera, fabulous job! A sure winner. Love, Audrey

Poet Destroyer A November 22, 2010 at 8:37 PM wow! wow! ,,that is all i will say for now,,, i guess my rules where not at as hard as i thought,,,, cool,, and awesome,..p.d.