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Divorce

THE RISE AND FALL First rays of sunrise Two lovers bloom with the light So soon the sunset. THREE’S A CROWD First there were two just you and me then you decided to make that three the same line you spun to hooks us both this fool full of anger full of wroth a new life now across the sea. PROMISES PROMISES In Church a promise we made to each other In Court a promise we made to each other. © Harry J Horsman 2010

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Date: 1/11/2011 9:48:00 AM
Nice one Harry, kinda clever also, well done in the contest....:)
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Date: 12/2/2010 8:57:00 PM
ANd congratulations. I could have sworn I saw all the winners, yet I don't recall visiting yours yet!!.
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Date: 12/2/2010 8:55:00 PM
Harry, that haiku at the top is divine!! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 12/2/2010 2:50:00 PM
Nice work Harry...well done ..Congrats...
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Date: 12/2/2010 12:41:00 PM
Congratulations on this high place win the contest, harry
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Date: 12/2/2010 8:55:00 AM
How sweet the start, how settled the end, excellent, enjoyed it. Congrats on your win:)
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Date: 12/2/2010 6:56:00 AM
Harry, thanks for the comment on my D.D.Dime~ you are right about it, and it's consequences. By the way) Congratulations! With your awesome 3some of 3 differ forms. I had lots of fun reading every entry. I was surprised every one pulled off a beautiful and amazing Job to my request. lol,, and the whole time I thought it was going to be a tough contest,...p.d.
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Date: 12/2/2010 6:24:00 AM
Congrats Harry on your big win in P.D.'s great contest on divorce.. with this brilliant write and entry my friend.. enjoy your top spot on the winners list today with lots of luv..
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Date: 12/2/2010 5:49:00 AM
Congratulations Harry for your win in P.D.'s "Divorce Club Contest". Love, Carol
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Date: 12/1/2010 8:14:00 PM
Super Harry ..and judging is happening right now according to my charts .. this should be in the top ten luv.. its super ..like u luv..
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Date: 12/1/2010 5:32:00 PM
Reads like a winner.Good luck..Sara
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Date: 11/28/2010 3:54:00 PM
certainly to the point, quite punchey, and with depth, and thank you for commenting,
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Date: 11/26/2010 5:27:00 PM
Great writing Harry, Good Luck in the contest :-) Adell
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Date: 11/26/2010 12:11:00 PM
Brilliant write Harry, stark reality of divorce.. Good luck for Pd's contest and thank you for taking the time out to comment.. Enjoy the weekend ahead ;-)
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Date: 11/26/2010 11:45:00 AM
Hello Harry, This is so true and has really strong wording. I love the first "The rise and Fall" Well done As Always, Shar
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Date: 11/25/2010 8:50:00 PM
Harry, smiles good luck ~best holiday wishes*Luv~Skat
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Date: 11/25/2010 5:47:00 PM
very humorous and frolicsome entry to the contest. Good luck, harry
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Date: 11/25/2010 5:35:00 PM
my opinion for what it is worth, is fiction gives licence to the imagination. Harry. Very close to the fact, Harry. Smile! It does cause us trouble at times. Before we turn the mind loose on it own, we need to learn how to shut it down first. "Good Luck In The Contest!" Agape, Moses
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Date: 11/25/2010 8:53:00 AM
Harry my friend..u have nailed this one down to be number one for sure luv in the contest.. good luck but your entry speaks volumes to us all.. we can relate luv.. enjoyed ..and a Happy Thanksgiving Day to u..
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Date: 11/25/2010 1:05:00 AM
You really capture the bitterness of divorced couples, Harry. Awesome entry for the contest and you don't need me to wish you luck. Your poetry stands on its own merits. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/24/2010 11:14:00 PM
Hello, Harry, passing by, can't wait to get all entries in,, , Enjoyed your entry, and have a wonderful blessed Thanksgiving day,. always,..Miss P.D.
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Date: 11/24/2010 10:33:00 PM
of romance and ruins!! a real glittering and witty piece with descriptive lines woven in solid, unified imgaery! good luck in the contest, harry! warmest, nette
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