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DIVORCE

Deliver onto me the strength to carry on my Lord and don't let me fail I love my family and I don't want to see them suffer on account of me Veer me towards truth and honesty, allow me to be part of a greater plan Only you Father have the ability to heal my soul and ease my heart, so please Remind me every day to do my very best for it is only in the letting go that Closure can finally bring the peace I so much need. I am like a wounded Eagle flying towards gateways of a stranger's land so please, help me cope.

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Matt Caliri

Date: 1/17/2024 10:01:00 PM

Congrats placing 11th out of 49 entries! I loved this message of hope, and the spiritual aura surrounding it. Great job!

Bill Baker

Date: 12/17/2023 11:15:00 AM

A heart felt Acrostic on a very traumatic time in the lives of all involved, Vie. A great entry for the contest. Good luck! I want to wish you a Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year! Bill & Sara Baker

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 12/17/2023 3:12:00 PM

Thank you Bill for stopping by. Merry Christmas to you and your dear Sara, keep well both of you :)

Hiya Sharma

Date: 12/17/2023 7:36:00 AM

Ahh, this is such an evocative and heartfelt take for the contest, dear Rose.. It's a really complex situation when two souls part ways, especially when family is involved. Sigh, you've so impeccably described the emotions of such a delicate situation in a soul-touching way! Sending light, this is beautifully weaved..

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 12/17/2023 3:11:00 PM

Thanks for reading and taking time to share with me your thoughts dear Hiya. No it is never easy to make the decision to go, or stay. Many get wounded when the family dynamics fall apart.

Joe Dimino

Date: 12/17/2023 5:32:00 AM

Divorce! The wonder word. I don't know anyone of the older crowd, who did it, and did not come to regret it. If one hung in there long enough for the children's sake...they can now try to learn to unconditionally love each other. Never too old to learn. Blessings.

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 12/17/2023 3:10:00 PM

I agree nowadays people give up too easy, sometimes pride and ego get in the way, other times, it was never meant to be, still, never an easy decision to stay or go, thanks for reading Joe, :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/17/2023 12:08:00 AM

It's always sad when couples divorce but if the relationship has gone toxic it's for the best. Its sad though when children are involved. Tom

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 12/17/2023 4:20:00 AM

Hello Tom, yes its always sad and a time of great awareness, loss changes us all. Thank you for taking them time to leave a comment, have a great day full of blessings, :)

Karen Jones

Date: 12/16/2023 2:40:00 PM

What a heartfelt poetic plea that reads like a prayer. Beautiful and unique. I love the positive energy. Good luck in the contest!

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 12/17/2023 4:18:00 AM

Thank you dear Karen, its always heart wrenching when love ends and everyone has to deal in their own separate way, praying for them all