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Paula Goldsmith

Divorce

Devastated
Individuals
Vowing love now departing
Over time
Reconciliation
Comes with
Eternal peace for all.

Copyright © Paula Goldsmith | Year Posted 2023

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December 14, 2023 at 9:42 AM

Your acrostic is peaceful filled with acceptance of the inevitability when families break down to separate. You said so much with few words. Great job! Good luck in the contest.

Paula Goldsmith

December 14, 2023 at 11:48 AM

Thanks for your note and for your good luck. Good to see you. Glad you like my Acrostic write. So very sad when this happens. Have a great/wonderful day...........

November 27, 2023 at 8:49 AM

Well, divorce is like a death in which no one is a winner, but you gave them the option of working things out, so I see. It can happen, but mostly it never works out. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara

Paula Goldsmith

November 27, 2023 at 6:18 PM

Thanks for your note. Good to see you. Glad you enjoyed my "Divorce" write. You are so right in what you said. Many times it will not work out. Have a great/wonderful day...........

Andrea Dietrich

November 26, 2023 at 2:46 PM

You left this on such a positive note. Great job.

Paula Goldsmith

November 27, 2023 at 6:17 PM

Thanks for your note. Good to see you. Glad you enjoyed my "Divorce" write. Have a great/wonderful day...........

Charles Messina

November 25, 2023 at 5:47 AM

Excellent acrostic, Paula. I attempted this a few times, but I just couldn't put it together. Acrostics aren't my strong suit (lol) BOL in the contest!

Paula Goldsmith

November 27, 2023 at 6:16 PM

Thanks for your note and for your BOL. Good to see you. Glad you like my Acrostic write. I enjoy writing the Acrostic type. You are so right, we all have the type we can write/cannot write. Some I find very hard so I stay away from them. I like to try new ones from time to time. Have a great/wonderful day...........

November 24, 2023 at 1:59 AM

Divorce is something that probably was never meant to be, but unfortunately it exists and can cause much hardship decision. But I am not one to judge. Reconciliation would be great, but not a forced decision. ~ Regards & blessings, my friend // paul

Paula Goldsmith

November 24, 2023 at 8:50 AM

Thanks for your note. Good to see you. Glad you enjoyed my "Divorce" write. I enjoyed reading your comment. You are so right in what you said. Have a great/wonderful day...........

Bj Legros Kelley

November 21, 2023 at 4:00 PM

I LOVE your acrostic. Divorce is probably the saddest subject to write about, certainly for any family member experiencing it, especially the couple. Your last line 'Reconciliation Comes with Eternal peace for all.' Oh Paula, such wisdom <3 If such could be possible, it is more precious than pure gold <3 Good luck in the contest, this is a great acrostic on the topic. Good job!

Paula Goldsmith

November 22, 2023 at 7:41 AM

Thanks for your note and for your Good Luck. Good to see you. Glad you love my "Divorce"/found it to be a great Acrostic write. You have put a big smile on my heart with your kind words. Thank You... Have a great/wonderful day...........

Jerry Brotherton

November 21, 2023 at 10:42 AM

A great acrostic, Paula. Have a blessed day.

Paula Goldsmith

November 22, 2023 at 7:38 AM

Thanks for your note. Good to see you. Glad you found this to be a great Acrostic write. That made my day. Thanks... Have a great/wonderful day...........

November 21, 2023 at 2:16 AM

Beautiful divorcé acrostic, i love the line “ Vowing love now departing“ so deep. And profound. Sometimes divorce is the best answer when one is stuck in a toxic relationship. But reconciliation is beautiful thought always. Pleasure reading this. Sending you light always

Paula Goldsmith

November 21, 2023 at 7:43 AM

Thanks for your note. Good to see you. Glad you found this to be a beautiful divorce acrostic write. Leaving can be the best things for some. Yes, reconciliation is a beautiful thought but does not always happen. Have a great/wonderful day...........

Andrea Dietrich

November 20, 2023 at 10:51 PM

I really like your simple approach here. I think many was overthinking it.

Paula Goldsmith

November 21, 2023 at 7:37 AM

Thanks for your note. Good to see you. Glad you like my simple approach to my "Divorce" write. Have a great/wonderful day...........

November 20, 2023 at 6:47 PM

Amen, eternal peace sure sounds ideal... s/t the reality seems to be that 'the old tensions' still simmer underneath the cover of cordiality... :) gw

November 21, 2023 at 7:29 PM

So true, Paula. Sad, but true...

Paula Goldsmith

November 21, 2023 at 7:35 AM

Thanks for your note. Good to see you. Glad you like this write. Only when people change do things change. Most people do not want to change so old tensions still simmer underneath the cover of cordiality. This can also happen with friendships. Have a great/wonderful day...........

November 20, 2023 at 6:26 PM

Love the few words you used to express divorce…devastating but reconciliation and peace can be found. Nice one, Paula!

Paula Goldsmith

November 21, 2023 at 7:30 AM

Thanks for your note. Good to see you. Glad you enjoyed my "Divorce" write. 3 words with peace being the best one. Peace for all...Have a great/wonderful day...........

November 20, 2023 at 5:22 PM

A positive twist to divorce, Paula, I like it! A good entry for the contest, my friend. I want to take a moment to congratulate you on your three poems being published in Poetry Soup's latest Anthology! Yeah!!! Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Paula Goldsmith

November 21, 2023 at 7:28 AM

Good to see you. Thanks for your note and for your congratulation on my three poems being published in Poetry Soup's latest Anthology. The new book is great. I was very happy to find myself listed. Glad you found this to be a positive twist to divorce. Your words are so kind. You have made my day extra special. Have a great/wonderful day...........

November 20, 2023 at 4:30 PM

Reads like a winner, Paula. Good luck! Great job!

Paula Goldsmith

November 21, 2023 at 7:18 AM

Thanks for your note and for your good luck/great job. Good to see you. Glad you like my Acrostic write. Hard title but I enjoyed bring it to life. Have a great/wonderful day...........

November 20, 2023 at 2:43 PM

Well described. Happy Thanksgiving!

Paula Goldsmith

November 21, 2023 at 7:13 AM

Thanks for your note. Good to see you. Glad you like this "Divorce" write. Happy Thanksgiving to you... Have a great/wonderful day...........

November 20, 2023 at 2:38 PM

Time is a good healer and it’s nice to see couples that have been parted reconciled. A great Acrostic poem Paula… Belle

Paula Goldsmith

November 21, 2023 at 7:12 AM

Thanks for your note. Good to see you. Glad you found this to be a great Acrostic poem. That makes me happy. Have a great/wonderful day...........

Panagiota Romios

November 20, 2023 at 2:23 PM

Rarely do divorced people get back together. It’s perfectly OK that we disagree. Women are beaten by their husbands, get divorced but do not get chummy and go back to get beaten but some do! They are beaten again and end up in morgues That’s what I see and know! Sorry but soup mail won’t work for me as long as the AD is there. I am on an iPad and there is no way I can use it.. not happy. Pangie, you can use the poen forma to soup me.

Panagiota Romios

November 21, 2023 at 8:31 AM

A song for this poem, it would be nice to add it on, Frank Sinatra …. “ the second time around” ))) Mazel Tov! Thank you for explaining their experiences and soup mailing me here I don’t mind at all, I was able to get one litter out last night. But I am visually impaired and it’s really funny and makes it really hard to do for me.. thank you for being my friend. Pangie xx

Paula Goldsmith

November 21, 2023 at 7:10 AM

Thanks for your note. Good to see you. Some leave because they are beaten. None of my friends were beaten. They all wanted a new man. Two remarried the same one/divorce the second time. Have a great/wonderful day...........

Margarita Lillico

November 20, 2023 at 1:59 PM

You just said it Paula!

Paula Goldsmith

November 21, 2023 at 7:05 AM

Thanks for your note. Good to see you. Glad you like this "Divorce" write. Have a great/wonderful day...........

November 20, 2023 at 1:29 PM

You described it perfectly. Nice acrostic dear.

Paula Goldsmith

November 21, 2023 at 7:04 AM

Thanks for your note. Good to see you. Glad you enjoyed my "Divorce" write. Have a great/wonderful day...........

William Kelii Kekaula

November 20, 2023 at 1:05 PM

Ah, Paula, a step in the right direction. If it were to be true as polls trend a differing track in opposition. Aloha, William

Paula Goldsmith

November 20, 2023 at 1:29 PM

Thanks for your note. Good to see you. Many of my friends have done this. Some I still cannot understand why they did. I was in two of the weddings. Have a great/wonderful day...........

November 20, 2023 at 12:53 PM

Nicely penned Acrostic summing the steps of separation and eventually reconciliation. Good luck with the contest Paula.

Paula Goldsmith

November 20, 2023 at 1:24 PM

Thanks for your note and for your good luck. Good to see you. Glad you like my Acrostic write. Have a great/wonderful day...........

Paula Goldsmith

November 20, 2023 at 11:21 AM

Divorce ~ Date Written: 11/20/2023

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