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Divinity

poets, the evergreens, their poems, the word gospels that didn't make the big book like birds on overhead wires accidentally perched in the sequence of a Beethoven symphony but those words divine, while I figure out grain on half lit wooden floors reduced, now, to poems in pyjamas, oh my life, delayed, enforcing other immortalities

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Date: 2/3/2024 5:36:00 PM
your poem was quite thought provoking, Clive. I especially liked: birds on overhead wires accidentally perched in the sequence of a Beethoven symphony---such outstanding imagery. The last few lines touched my soul for some reason...maybe it was 'enforcing other immortalities...definitely pondering those words...enjoy your evening, Sara
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Clive Culverhouse
Date: 2/3/2024 11:25:00 PM
Thanks Sara
Date: 2/3/2024 5:47:00 AM
Divine? Maybe. A little piece of each ones heart? Definitely. Have a nice weekend Clive
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Clive Culverhouse
Date: 2/3/2024 6:19:00 AM
Thanks Tom
Date: 2/3/2024 3:22:00 AM
What a deep write and i love the cadence of this! So captivating and melodious! And i love the lines “ poets, the evergreens, their poems, the word gospels that didn't make the big book like birds on overhead wires“ just brilliant and powerful what youv delivered here as always! Truly words to ponder on! Pleasure reading your work.
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Clive Culverhouse
Date: 2/3/2024 6:18:00 AM
Thanks IE

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