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Divine Vision

Silently, my breath aligns chi centers as I reach a dazzling state of harmony ; when quiet, murmurous drift brings me to corridors of an unknown vortex beyond ceiling of stars arcane, where a swirling trance pervades my essence... the howl from a surreal mind becomes reverent, erased from the tousle of barbed wanderings. And as inner light swells within my third eye, this being connects with Divine Presence like one immeasurable union: this sonorous music purer than all chapel bells winging, draping my flesh with heavenly joy. Through undisturbed contemplation, a pervading ease cleanses all the insolent woes now transformed into a river of gorgeous beats, where soul’s center finds my holy nature. More Than The Eyes Can See Contest For Mystic Rose 5/1/2016 Words: Gorgeous, Surreal, Sonorous, Dazzling, Murmurous, Corridors, Arcane

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Date: 10/20/2016 8:10:00 AM
wow Nette, you are one great poetess lady...loved this one a lot- you are so gifted!.congrats on your placement :)-luloo
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Date: 5/5/2016 1:13:00 PM
This is is fine piece with soul-reaching quality. I love this so much
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Date: 5/1/2016 2:33:00 PM
Beautifully done my lovely friend. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl
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Date: 5/1/2016 1:26:00 PM
A heavenly vortex...love it nette...great write...^WW^
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Date: 5/1/2016 7:03:00 AM
- Wonderful (Gorgeous, Surreal, Sonorous, Dazzling, Murmurous, Corridors, Arcane :) written, Nette - Luck in contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/1/2016 7:01:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your contest entry..Way to go..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 5/1/2016 2:34:00 AM
You honor the godly being in you with this graceful poem, more than eyes can see!
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Date: 5/1/2016 12:36:00 AM
Very serene peaceful and wise, wish I was there at that place!
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Date: 4/30/2016 7:00:00 PM
A beautiful Vision.
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Date: 4/30/2016 6:06:00 PM
Deep meditative poem that heightens your enlightened spirit--- this is profoundly ethereal!
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