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Divine Sunshine

When it’s miserable and dreary Cold, dark, cloudy and rainy Seems liquid desolation is unfurled Along with all the weight of the world A void grows exponentially with morningtide As I wither in torment from endless rain outside And that’s when I need most to turn within To the inward deepest source of my chagrin I forage for the slightest flicker Any flame to dissipate the blurr A candle lit to give at least a little ray of hope To help find my lost wondrous kaleidoscope I ache when I miss the golden rays of sun That most magical primal phenomenon That link to what’s utterly divine I so wish I’d been given a name like SunShine **A wink to my lovely PS friend SunShine AP: 1st place 2020 Submitted on February 21, 2018

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Date: 2/22/2018 4:50:00 PM
I was raised in Wichita where the winters were cold and the snow got very deep but I'm sure not so much as up north! It was fun when I was a kid but that wore off several years ago!.....80)...I enjoyed your descriptive poem and feel the misery as well. COME ON SUMMER!!!!
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Date: 2/22/2018 4:51:00 PM
O yes. Thank you for your delightful visit and comment, Pat.
Date: 2/22/2018 9:57:00 AM
I ache when I have no sun either, need more Vitamin D... Nice write Line..
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Date: 2/22/2018 11:50:00 AM
Thanks for your visit, SO. Much appreciated.
Date: 2/22/2018 7:56:00 AM
I so agree with you, Line and I grasp the feeling easily by your expressive words xxoo
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Date: 2/22/2018 9:07:00 AM
Thanks for your visit and comment, Mike.
Date: 2/22/2018 7:26:00 AM
The noble Line (sometimes short for Adeline). I don't know where you live but winter can be a difficult time of year. Your emotions come through well in this piece.
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Date: 2/22/2018 9:08:00 AM
Yes, Canada winters are cold. Thanks for your visit and comment, James.
Date: 2/22/2018 12:04:00 AM
Another awesome poem!! Great Job!
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Date: 2/22/2018 7:20:00 AM
Thank you, Robertina. Much appreciated.

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