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Divine Rupture

A glorified pod, Bursts at the sight of the sun: Reaching for its dream.

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James Fraser

Date: 1/16/2010 3:05:00 PM

I totally agree with Carol, but BOY OH BOY > you have so so many that run it close >> James

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/15/2010 2:34:00 PM

Raul, YOu are great with doing haiku. andrea

Audrey Haick

Date: 1/13/2010 4:58:00 PM

I can feel the the seed agitating as it feels the warmth from the rising sun! Great job as usual, Raul! Peace, Audrey

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/13/2010 4:52:00 AM

Raul, this is one of the best you have ever written. Thank you for constantly writing your amazing poetry and sharing it with us. Love, Carol

Date: 1/12/2010 6:02:00 PM

Wonderful use of imagery for a artistic view. I really like the last line. Well done! Karen

Marty Owens

Date: 1/12/2010 5:57:00 PM

Very nice Raul...enjoyed...Marty

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/12/2010 2:57:00 PM

Those seed have to make a new plant. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara