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Divine Intervention

It was that particular point of time in my lone life, When, mind like tabula rasa, empty and without strife; Mornings started and evenings ended without any aim, Driven by impulses I lived, like wildlife, with no shame... Alcoholism, like chains of a lunatic, had bound me, Though willing, like bird in a cage, I could not become free; Not today, to me I would say, yet mind will slowly pull, Gulping peg after pegs, I'd walk like a random mad bull... Health or wealth, like for animals, did not matter at all, Body or soul - no faith or ethics - in my ear did fall; Parents, siblings, friends, relatives - to no one did I care, Life flew about floating, like aimless feather in the air... It's then, like punishments or coercive ways of nature, Ailments began eating myself, like a deadly-creature; Lungs, liver, stomach, bladder and kidneys seemed protesting, Eyes, ears, skin and bones seemed to stop their act of protecting... Does benevolent earth, her exploiters, endlessly bear? Doesn't Ecosystem in the form of flood and drought scare? Could even best physicians, one's dead life ever bring back? How I, like a fool, my life to death willingly offer? Thus I, like one at the brink of the grave, stood lost! Helpless! My doctor though fixed tentative date, expressed hopefulness; Craving to drink seduced me, like lady with endless love, I knew my soul soiled; should be changed; yet, I did not know how... I felt none and nothing I could rely on, except God, I did cling to Him, like a dog to his master and lord; God, like good mother seeing her child in pain, intervened, Caring for my needs, touching my inner wounds, my ills healed... My heart, like a bouquet, to my Lord, now I have offered, By prayer, hymn and divine worship, my life is powered; My strength and weakness, like an open-book, before Him lies, Though urge for evils press me, He'll grant me courage to rise...! 31 December 2021 DIVINE INTERVENTION Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Chantelle Anne Cooke

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Date: 1/5/2022 9:41:00 PM
A lovely poem, Christuraj, that shows how one's life can be changed for the positive, glad you found God and His love:)
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Date: 1/5/2022 6:04:00 AM
Oh Chris, "My heart, like a bouquet, to my Lord," if only we could all come to Him like a bouquet, floral and scented, alas most of us come broken and mended with little to offer but our wounded selves, still you never gave up. That is commendable my friend. Congratulations on a well written poem making it in the top 10, that is an amazing achievement in itself. Love xo
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Date: 1/4/2022 2:28:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Divine Intervention" is a wonderful story/write. I love your line, "Though urge for evils press me, He'll grant me courage to rise...!" I really enjoyed this write. Have a blessed day writing away...................
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 1/4/2022 8:39:00 PM
Thank you very much.
Date: 1/1/2022 3:44:00 AM
This is a wonderful story of fall and redemption, Christuraj ! Yes, all help comes from God if we rely on Him ! Is it real or fictional? Please excuse my curiosity ! Wish you a Happy New Year!
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 1/1/2022 9:27:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 12/31/2021 10:29:00 PM
Tremendous write, Chris! If we call Him, He hastens to our side! Thanks for sharing
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 1/1/2022 12:48:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 12/31/2021 6:24:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this. What a testimony of God's intervention midst His compassion and healing power. (By the way in your last line, is it really grand or grant?) A very blessed New Year 2022 to you and your loved ones.
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 12/31/2021 6:32:00 AM
Thank you very much for the correction.

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