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Divine Intervention

Divine Intervention I was supposed to die. More than once. In a car, driving too fast or erratically. It is my race car driver foot. And my cavalier attitude. My impatience and my devils-may-care-self. I know this, and yet still I crash up cars. Expecting to die. Wishing to die? Feeling disappointed I have not been able to die? It is curious. But sometimes I walk away, terribly disappointed. My cars get severely injured, and yet here I am. In one piece, not a broken neck, a broken arm or a broken foot. Once when I was flying through the air I expected to land on a glass T-top roof. I knew I was a goner. But then from the bowels of my soul I heard my voice cry out “God, help me!” And that car flipped one hundred and eighty degrees. I landed with a WHOMP in a snowdrift, wheels down. The guy who walked sixty feet in four-foot deep snow Asked me “how I did it”. He said he worked in a pit crew at the Indy 500 once upon a time. He had never seen anything like it. I have never seen anything like it either, and yet, it happened to me. Written 12-27-2021 Contest: Divine Intervention Sponsor: Chantelle Anne Cooke

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Date: 12/27/2021 9:26:00 PM
Divine Intervention, for sure. I'm surprised you found the courage to carry on driving. I think this is a winner.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/28/2021 3:37:00 AM
I love to drive Shirley; I truly missed my calling. When I take a career assessment test, it says I have more in common with race car drivers than people with any other professions.
Date: 12/27/2021 10:56:00 AM
So glad it worked out the way it did, Caren!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/28/2021 3:38:00 AM
Thank you Ilene. It was 1980, and I had a three month old and a five and six year old at home, so I guess God wanted me to stay and raise them.
Date: 12/27/2021 8:12:00 AM
Caren...it only takes one time and wham, that's the end. So, slow down, for goodness sakes. Obviously, you have so much to give to the world, you are here for a purpose. Don't throw it away for something called speed!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/28/2021 3:38:00 AM
Hahahaha I think my lead foot is slightly better these days Hank; snicker. snicker.

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