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Divine Intervention His name was Lynn. We had nothing in common. I – a city punk, twenty something, High School grad, Ironworker. He – an upstate NY, college educated, beret-wearing, ”Spiritual Giant”. Recurring questions dogged this relationship…. ….”Who am I?” ….”Who is he?” …”Why have our paths intertwined?” I don’t believe he ever told me anything, just left trails of spiritual bread crumbs for me to follow. He always seemed to teach me lessons I didn’t know were being taught. Guided me with firm yet gentle words allowing me to unveil my spirit in the safety of his presence. I reflect often on this Avatar, this incarnate teacher, stopping on his journey to assist another in their quest. His name was Lynn. We had nothing in common. ©11/16/2017 submitted to – AVATAR – Poetry Contest definition – an incarnate divine teacher

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Date: 12/16/2017 5:58:00 PM
John,congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve~`*
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Date: 12/16/2017 6:39:00 AM
Gorgeous write, John, enjoyed it very much ... congrats on your win. So many come-and-go from our lives that affect us in ways unseen ... and seen, sometimes. They are all part of who we become. Blessings.
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Date: 12/16/2017 3:42:00 AM
Congrats John on your placement
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Date: 12/15/2017 11:41:00 PM
Touching story. Congrats on your placement, John.
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Date: 11/16/2017 1:29:00 PM
A great story well told, I like the form poetic :) my best to you in the contest xomo
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Date: 11/16/2017 9:31:00 AM
I truly believe everyone we come in contact with on this journey, is for a reason. Great writing, John. Sincerely, Elaine
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