Divine Ethos

Hatred hides in cloudy sinister mind, showers acid rain,
dissolves the hideous opaque heart of the hollow man.
Humane lamp of forgiveness illumines abyss of inert soul,
penitence purifies, limpid complete man gets divine ethos.

March 26, 2019
Contest : Writing Challenge 5, March 2019, Four Lines
Sponsor : Dear Heart
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La France Avatar
March 29, 2019 at 5:57 PM
Subimal, congratulations on your win in my contest~
Sinha-Roy Avatar
April 1, 2019 at 1:42 AM
Thank you, Constance for the placement.
Andresen Avatar
March 27, 2019 at 2:17 PM
- A great poem for this writing challenge ... congratulations, Subimal :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Sinha-Roy Avatar
April 1, 2019 at 1:42 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise.
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