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A Jinjagoliath poem:
1st December 2022
Advent
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Hearing every raindrop Feeling every grain of sand Uniqueness of each snowflake Counting every hair-like strand The infinity of heaven And the stars that soar within Or eight billion human faces Wearing resources to thin What of all the tiny protons Whizzing all round.. Electrons and neutrinos Do their thing without a sound. Overwhelming are the numbers Or infinitesimal, it seems Far more awesome than the presence Is the silence inbetween. Dark matter say the scientists I know the opposite is true.. It's the dancing light between us That's connecting me to you.

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Date: 1/11/2023 1:30:00 PM
It such a lovely piece Christopher with a nice rhyme and flow. So good to meet another Brit here on PS, I'm north of the border. Take care, Gordon
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