Divine Archer

There once was an Archer, divine
He created a love as zealous as yours and mine

Hewn from a strong and sturdy branch He fashioned a bow 
From dust He created a bowstring as supple as a piece of dough

This Archer set out with bow and arrow in hand
He desired to set love’s fire to the land

With the strength of the bow, the flaming arrow sent forth
With the docility of the string, it's projectile was birthed 

Neither the bow nor the string took claim
To the arrow's path, success, or shame

For they both knew, the two made one, 
That, in the Archer, the victory had been won
 
Therefore they neither fret nor frown
And through this they have won the martyr’s crown 

Resting in their Master’s hands
They had hope in their unknown plans
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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September 24, 2026 at 11:30 AM
I've really been enjoying your poem and the emotions and imagery were so vivid that i could easily picture them as beautiful illustration. I'm a commission-based manga/webtoon artist,and I’d love to discuss the possibility of bringing this poem to life if you're ever interested. Feel free to reach out at gm@il : akiracomicart2@ or on inst@: akiraa_artly
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January 19, 2018 at 11:04 AM
Kiki, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this marvelous community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I TOO am ready to enjoy and follow you and your poetry if you'd like :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup 2018 :) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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January 7, 2018 at 7:08 AM
A well written first post Kiki... Welcome to poetry soup..
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January 6, 2018 at 9:13 AM
Interesting original pen, love the imagery!
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