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Dive Bomber - Tet

Dive bomber carpenter with red-stained teeth suicidal buzzing sound creeps me out 4/24/2019 Tetractys This Poetry Contest Sponsor - Charles Messina

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Eve Roper

Date: 5/7/2019 4:13:00 PM

Congratulations on your Tetractys form win. Hugs eve

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/7/2019 9:56:00 PM

Thanks, Eve! xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/4/2019 2:41:00 PM

a fly? I enjoyed this one, Kim! Congrats on the win.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/5/2019 7:37:00 AM

A Carpenter Bee! We have a home they love to dig into and they are territorial!

Alexis Y.

Date: 5/4/2019 11:54:00 AM

Hi Kim, It creeps me out too! Congratulations on your placement in the contest:-) Alexis

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/5/2019 7:38:00 AM

Thank you, Alexis!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/4/2019 8:17:00 AM

- Congratulations :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/5/2019 7:39:00 AM

Thank you, Anne-Lise!

Charles Messina

Date: 5/4/2019 7:49:00 AM

Creeps me out too, Kim. (lol) Awesome write as usual. Congratulations on your win. So many excellent poems in this contest (yours as well) Hugs Charlie

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/5/2019 7:39:00 AM

Thank you, Charles :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/27/2019 1:53:00 PM

- Sounds scary, Kim :) - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/27/2019 3:52:00 PM

Yes! Thanks...lol

Tom Cunningham

Date: 4/25/2019 3:06:00 AM

It's will they won't they ?, I keep a swat handy in case they come too close. The downside of summer I'm afraid. Good luck.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/25/2019 7:52:00 AM

For sure!

M. L. Kiser

Date: 4/24/2019 11:43:00 PM

Yes it does, "creep" one "out"...well penned.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/25/2019 7:52:00 AM

Thanks, M.L.!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/24/2019 9:22:00 PM

Japanese dive-bombers in miniature...their flag -- 'The Falling Sun.' LOL. Nice one, Kim. G.L. in the contest. ~ Gershon

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/24/2019 9:36:00 PM

Thank you, Gershon!