Distress

Relentless April Heat tremor humidity My bird so thirsty ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ April 15, 2016

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/15/2016 6:33:00 PM

VERy nice haiku!

Probir Gupta
Date: 4/15/2016 8:26:00 PM

Thank you...

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/15/2016 12:18:00 AM

so descriptive, probir..it's 49 degrees in our country... namaste and huggs

Probir Gupta
Date: 4/15/2016 2:57:00 AM

My goodness! And the hot N dry loo ? There too? .... Thanks for stopping by...

Lenny Gazbowski

Date: 4/14/2016 10:52:00 PM

Probir, I hope it cools down for you and your thirsty bird. Nicely penned haiku.

Lenny Gazbowski
Date: 4/15/2016 3:17:00 PM

Probir, I never listen to the news programs or read the papers so I was unaware of the quake. Here in the UK we rarely get any quakes, and when we do they are minor. Hope you and your loved ones are safe and well..

Probir Gupta
Date: 4/14/2016 11:31:00 PM

No sign of cooling down. Terrible heat, sweat and the notorious loo wind followed by the >5 jolting impact of the Myanmar quake wreak havoc here... The birds do come for the haiku... Thanks

Tim Smith

Date: 4/14/2016 7:20:00 PM

excellent haiku my friend...