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Distant Thunder - a Shan-Zi Poem

Water ripples On the pond surface Concentric circles Of perfect shape Raindrops plopping In rhythmic grace Announcing the storm

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Date: 7/26/2012 5:19:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Joann's "Shanzi" contest Joe. Love, Carol

Date: 7/22/2012 10:24:00 AM

Joe, congrats on your win, last stanza great haiku...David

Date: 7/22/2012 9:42:00 AM

I really like how you did yours, Joe. Congrats for your win.

Date: 7/22/2012 9:29:00 AM

A magical blend of words, Joe! Congrats on your wonderful win! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

Date: 7/21/2012 3:14:00 PM

((()))Congrats on your winning work..I really like this one..Very descriptive and expressive work...Sara

Date: 7/21/2012 8:03:00 AM

Very nice Joe.Congrats on your win!

Date: 7/21/2012 5:22:00 AM

congrats Joe on an amazing win for this incredible poem.. feeling the beauty luv..

Date: 7/20/2012 5:15:00 PM

I love the way the storm announces itself - beautiful images. Congratulations.

Date: 7/18/2012 8:32:00 AM

Wonderful...enjoyed your shanzi...best of luck in the contest.

Date: 7/17/2012 4:11:00 PM

So cool how you put this together. Very nice my friend. Michael