Distant Thoughts

Deep in the woods, so dimly lit
 Where trees rise high to meet the light
 In silken dress of white she sits
 As her thoughts take wing on  distant flight

 She seeks nature's muse in quietude
 While perusing the book on her lap
 And  during  a thoughtful interlude
A higher understanding she then taps

Then a memory of her  childhood days 
 Drifts into her mind
Where she'd chase  orange  butterflies  
And pick wildflowers that she'd find 


 And through the trees,  where sighs the breeze
 And leaves flutter as they fall
 The raven haired lass beneath the trees
 By  nature's   splendor  is   enthralled
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 6/8/2014 8:16:00 PM
JOSEPH, Congrats on, Isaiah's "Distant Thought" contest. AWESOME WIN.......LUV* LINDA
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Date: 6/5/2014 9:06:00 PM
What artistry in the images in your winning poem Joseph! I can easily see why it is a winner. Congratulations!
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Date: 6/3/2014 8:59:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful! Many congrat's on your win, Joseph. Lainie
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Date: 6/2/2014 5:18:00 AM
Hi Joseph, congrats on a worthy win! She is enthralled by nature's splendor, and I am, too, by this beautiful poem! // paul
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Date: 6/1/2014 3:48:00 PM
dropping by to drop my KUDOS Joseph.. :)!!!! GBU.. i want moooore! :D!
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Date: 6/1/2014 2:30:00 PM
Dear Joseph, I'm so happy for your big win. This poem is absolutely beautiful and I love the way you describe "nature's splendor." Congratulations!! Love, carolyn
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Date: 6/1/2014 12:56:00 PM
A beauty from you pen..it absolutely fits the picture. congrats. BG
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Date: 6/1/2014 2:05:00 AM
Congrats on the fine win for distant thoughts, joseph
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Date: 5/31/2014 11:55:00 PM
personally liked this ,congats on your win !
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Date: 5/31/2014 11:28:00 PM
Beautiful write Joseph worthy of great win ! Huge congrats !
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Date: 5/31/2014 11:08:00 PM
Congrats on the great win my friend!!!!!
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Date: 5/31/2014 10:51:00 PM
Congratulations on a well-deserved win!
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Date: 5/31/2014 8:57:00 PM
Nice win Joseph. The rhyme and cadence make for an easy nature walk.
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Date: 5/30/2014 12:47:00 AM
This is a beautiful interpretation of the painting, Joseph. It brings back those warm memories of childhood. Great work! Good luck in Isaiah's contest!.... I'm also writing a poem for this contest, but I don't think I will have it ready before the contest closes!
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Date: 5/29/2014 6:18:00 AM
Dear Joseph, What a lovely take on the picture! The poem flows beautifully and the last verse is especially powerful. Great job! Wishing you success in the contest. (I think you need to put the date written on the bottom.) Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/27/2014 6:16:00 PM
Yikes, that's awesome.. Good for you..BG
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Date: 5/27/2014 1:42:00 PM
Wow!! A real beauty my friend!!! Great contest entry!! Bravo!!!
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Date: 5/27/2014 9:19:00 AM
Lovely with great imagery! Well done!
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Date: 5/27/2014 8:35:00 AM
mmmmn.. nice beat nice rhyme.. it's all great :) however i feel a lil "bitin" :D?! lol i mean i want more!!!!, GBU always.. :D
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