Jessica Thompson Poet Rhyme

Distant Thoughts

Distant Thoughts
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Woes of this "Princess",
I choose not to be
oh for this life
that weigh like bricks on me.

That is why I ran away,
sitting here in natures hold
I like the peace
and futures here untold.

I can be whom I choose,
not whats chose for me
and out in this private place
I'm alive and free.

I don't care about these cloths,
They show not what's inside
and every secret  I have
to the trees I can confide.

But as life would have it,
yes...I have been found
now I stay in "Distant Thoughts"
and I hear no other sound.

5/26/14

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Poet Destroyer A June 9, 2014 at 4:16 PM Jessica, thank you for the comment on my comment...Linda

Poet Destroyer A June 8, 2014 at 8:20 PM JESSICA, Congrats on, Isaiah's "Distant Thought" contest. AWESOME WIN.......LUV* LINDA Jessica Thompson June 9, 2014 at 1:52 PM Thank You Linda, I am very proud of the win. Glad you enjoyed the piece. Take care my friend, Jess

Vera Duggan June 3, 2014 at 7:26 AM Congrats. my friend, excellent write, take care......Vera........... Jessica Thompson June 3, 2014 at 2:56 PM Thank you so much Vera :) I am glad you liked it. Take care my friend, Jess

Barbara Gorelick June 1, 2014 at 1:15 PM I enjoyed your poem...congrats to you..She did look peaceful didn't she? BG Jessica Thompson June 1, 2014 at 7:51 PM Thank you B.G, I am really glad you liked the piece :) Take care my friend, Jess

Dr.Ram Mehta June 1, 2014 at 2:15 AM Congrats on the win for distant thoughts, jessica Jessica Thompson June 1, 2014 at 1:11 PM Thank You Dr. Ram, I appreciate the kind comment. Take care my friend, Jess

Robert Lindley May 31, 2014 at 11:12 PM A great write and a fine win my friend, Congrats!!!!!! Jessica Thompson June 1, 2014 at 1:10 PM Thank you Robert, I thought I would do a little better with this poem, however I am glad I got 7th at least. Still really happy :) Take care my friend Jess

Ravi Sathasivam May 27, 2014 at 7:20 AM Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed . Tfs Jessica Thompson May 27, 2014 at 10:08 AM Thank You Ravi, thank you for your wonderful comment about the piece. Take Care Friend :) Jess

Carl Fraser May 27, 2014 at 2:03 AM This is a very well written piece, it flows nicely along and conveys a wonderful message, blessings Carl Jessica Thompson May 27, 2014 at 10:07 AM Thank you Carl, appreciate your kind comments always :) Take care Friend, Jess

Robert Lindley May 26, 2014 at 10:53 PM A truly great write and entry!! Bravo!! Jessica Thompson May 26, 2014 at 11:43 PM Thank you Robert, you are always very kind about my work. Glad you enjoyed my friend. Take care, Jess

Andrea Dietrich May 26, 2014 at 9:21 PM this is a great take on that picture of the girl by a tree. It is cool to see someone do that theme already. Jessica Thompson May 26, 2014 at 11:43 PM Thank You Andrea, I was deff trying to capture the beauty within the painting. I am really glad you thought I did well. I really take your and everyone elses comment to heart. Thank you so very much. Take care Friend, Jess :)

Tim Smith May 26, 2014 at 7:36 PM This is wonderful Jess. Sitting alone with her thoughts... Goes perfectly with the picture...Hugs Tim Jessica Thompson May 26, 2014 at 11:41 PM Thank You Tim, always lovely hearing your comments on my pieces. Glad you liked it. Have a wonderful evening . Take care Friend Jess :)

Casarah Nance May 26, 2014 at 6:13 PM i like that, every secret I have to the trees I confide.. very well said. I can see your words along with the painting so perfectly. good luck in the contest, well done on the poem :) Jessica Thompson May 26, 2014 at 6:18 PM Thank you Casarah, Your kind comment is most appreciated. I really hope I have a good chance in the contest, thank you for best wishes. Pleasure to meet you. Take care Friend, Jess :)