Distant Thoughts

As she walked slowly
Towards the woods,
She kept thinking of her old house..
The one so dear to her.
 
She remembered her friends,
Her school, and her garden,
As she sat on a moss-covered rock..
Almost on the verge of tears.
 
Book on her lap,
She then slowly recollected,
Her parents' repeated words –
“Love everything around you.”
 
She looked around for a companion,
Sitting under the tree’s shade..
Gradually starting
To absorb into her surroundings.

Getting out of her pensive mood,
She appreciated the beauty of nature..
And feeling much more free,
Went home to bid goodbye.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Clemons Avatar
October 21, 2014 at 9:59 AM
Great poem, Sneha. The sense of finally feeling comfort at what one would consider home, is greatly expressed. Great honesty in this piece. Enjoyable overall. Check out some of my poems, might find some you like. Peace.
Walker  Avatar
June 13, 2014 at 9:44 PM
Sneha, Congratulations on your win in the contest. This is beautifully written... Verlena
A   Avatar
June 8, 2014 at 8:16 PM
SNEHA, Congrats on, Isaiah's "Distant Thought" contest. AWESOME WIN.......LUV* LINDA
Clemons Avatar
June 7, 2014 at 10:03 PM
Beautiful piece, Sneha. The description of nature as the companion was deeply expressed. Great imagery, with metaphorical undertones. Enjoyable overall. Check out some of my poems, might find some you like. Peace.
George   Avatar
June 3, 2014 at 9:02 AM
Many congrat's on your win, Sneha. Lainie
Gorelick Avatar
June 1, 2014 at 12:58 PM
Havent read your work before, but you did a great job with this. Congrats to you! BG
A. Sharma Avatar
June 1, 2014 at 11:00 AM
Extremely wonderful Sneha ,, worthy of great win ! Congrats !
Mehta Avatar
June 1, 2014 at 2:06 AM
Congrats on the win for distant thoughts, Sneha
Bantawa Avatar
May 31, 2014 at 11:58 PM
nice write, congrats on your win !
Merritt Avatar
May 26, 2014 at 8:24 AM
?? This is beautifully composed. It reminds me of so many things and so many people. I felt very peaceful and at one reading it. Great job, Sneha !
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