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Distant Spring

Fragrant roses once held a promise of love and happiness But thorns of heartbreak leave a crimson stain of despair And a trickle of tears with a cold briny bouquet As love wilts in the season of loss and pain No blooms will come forth from a heart that's broken To blossom in spring with joy, and dance with glee All that's left are gloomy thoughts and an empty heart But time will heal the hurt, hope will then return A season of possibilities will be renewed in the heart Like the joy of butterflies awaiting yet a distant spring 1-22-19 10 Lines 10 Words Free Verse 1 Contest Theme: Heartbreak Sponsor: Lu Loo

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Brandy Nicole

Date: 2/5/2019 7:50:00 PM

Your thoughts caress gently around me. Congratulations Joseph, on this win. ~ Brandy

Brandy Nicole

Date: 1/24/2019 10:39:00 PM

Even though a touch of sadness lingers within, there is hope. I like that. Your thoughts are beautiful and tender. From the heart. "Like the joy of butterflies awaiting yet a distant spring" This thought has wings. It truly does. ~ Brandy

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/24/2019 3:33:00 PM

fantastic redo!!

David Byrne

Date: 1/24/2019 12:54:00 AM

Flowers always die despite their beauty.

Alexis Y.

Date: 1/23/2019 7:50:00 PM

Hi Joseph, I really enjoyed this write. I look forward to Spring. It's my favorite season. I especially liked the last three lines " But time will heal the hurt, hope will then return, A season of possibilities will be renewed in the heart, Like the joy of butterflies awaiting yet a distant spring" Well done. I hope to see you on the winners list. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/23/2019 3:13:00 PM

Excellent imagery. soupmail for ya.

Silent One

Date: 1/23/2019 1:32:00 PM

Beautiful lines, but such a sad poem..

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/22/2019 3:31:00 PM

Heartbreak..despair..gloom..a sad rendering. I like the hopeful ending.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/22/2019 1:18:00 PM

- All hearts and roses flowers in the spring ... it's the most beautiful time of the year ... and time for new beginnings, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Valerie Staton

Date: 1/22/2019 11:36:00 AM

Nicely written.