Distant Shores

In my mind the salt air is strong again 
and I row the boat with others toward those
distant shores where we take up sword and axe 
against those living there, people Lief chose.

We have done it before and such prizes 
reward us greatly. Lief leads us all and 
follow him in adventure, Our dragon 
breaks the waves as we go to a far land.

My shield rests to my left on edge of the 
side's rim It's secured between double boards 
and shows its face to wind and sea. The sail
flaps itself in the wind held by strong cords.

Sail’s flame breathing monster now talks to us. 
I have double horn helmet and carry 
sword at my side. I follow Lief to where 
Odin leads him in land raid most scary.

The cold north wind blows hard against my face
spirits are high, singing our voices soar
The salt air is strong in my mind just now.
Would to god I could follow Lief once more

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 6/24/2018 7:23:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this distant shore tale of old. Well done!
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Alfred Berggren
Date: 6/24/2018 8:28:00 PM
Thanks, Susan.
Date: 6/20/2018 9:02:00 AM
ahhh, you went the route of the ancients with your poem. I love that creative place you took the challenge.
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Alfred Berggren
Date: 6/20/2018 8:09:00 PM
Thanks,Andrea, for reading my stuff.
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