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Distant Shores

When he was but a lad of eight the sand-drenched shores of distant lakes beckoned from three miles away ~ her wave-tossed fingers calling Ten years anon the world did widen ocean's spray from coastal islands coughed up rarest treasures ~ enticing newly freed horizons Now twenty-eight, in life's full bloom yearning for those distant shores of frozen, ice-capped polar regions ~ penguins preened and pranced at his good fortune 'Twas then and there he realized that the borders of true distant shores extended far beyond this homely planet ~bending space and time galactically How to reach them is his challenge Missiles, rockets, telescopes -- scientific hope Quantume physics, string theory, spiraling gyroscopes ~ myriad multiverses teasing mortal minds Yet the farthest out he dare does go Terrestrial winds inside him blow: O, distant shores come back to me ~ on winged ships of entropy '

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Date: 6/24/2018 7:05:00 PM
Awesome! Congratulations on your win with this graphic and clever poem about distant shores and how perception builds with age. A compelling read. Reminded me of my youngest...
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/24/2018 7:56:00 PM
Thank you so much, Susan. Your generous praise has given my spirits a lift. Very much appreciated. Best always, Gershon
Date: 6/22/2018 7:44:00 AM
Brilliant work, congrats on win. Faux
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/22/2018 1:32:00 PM
Why, thank you so much, Faux! Much appreciated … and thanks for letting me know that I'd placed in the contest! :) gw
Date: 6/18/2018 8:55:00 AM
Reverberating rhyme and rhythm in the beautiful free verse ... Nicely written ...
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/18/2018 9:15:00 AM
You eloquent comment sends me soaring, Probir! So nice to see your visit and read your kind words. Thank you, my friend. Best wishes, Gershon
Date: 6/18/2018 6:01:00 AM
- Part of becoming an adult ... excitement and a bit of adventure :) - A wonderful poem, Gershon - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/18/2018 9:14:00 AM
Anne-Lise, your thoughts are certainly spot-on and along with your visit, very much appreciated! :) gw
Date: 6/18/2018 2:48:00 AM
Lovely verse Gershon, I think that's in all of us, what is beyond, our curiosity gets the better of us. Good luck. Tom.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/18/2018 9:13:00 AM
Thank you for the valuable insight, Tom, and for the good wishes! Best always, Gershon

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