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Distant Rumblings

Distant Rumblings Distant rumblings tug at my permanence. Muffled metal click-clack of worn track, soft metronome of travel. Iced roar crystal contrails plotting a course through the heavens. Far away hum - rubber kissing asphalt avenues of escape. Distant rumblings tug at my permanence. ©11/23/2017 submitted to – STANDARD CONTEST NO 55

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Date: 12/8/2017 8:21:00 AM
Ah .. that would be my retirement plan!! :) Nice write John.
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Date: 12/7/2017 9:33:00 PM
Fantastic imagery/soundscape, brings so much to mind for me. Another fave :)
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