John Lawless Poet Free verse

Distant Rumblings

Distant Rumblings

Distant rumblings
tug at my permanence.
Muffled metal
click-clack
of worn track,
soft metronome
of travel.
Iced roar
crystal contrails
plotting a course
through the heavens.
Far away hum -
rubber kissing
asphalt avenues
of escape.
Distant rumblings
tug at my permanence.


©11/23/2017

submitted to – STANDARD CONTEST NO 55

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Judith S December 8, 2017 at 8:21 AM Ah .. that would be my retirement plan!! :) Nice write John.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart December 7, 2017 at 9:33 PM Fantastic imagery/soundscape, brings so much to mind for me. Another fave :)