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Distant Pipes Lament-The End

Distant Pipes Lament - The End - A Collaboration

Standing out most beautiful lady,
Warmly Inside strutting In the darkest hours.
As warm before me you stand In glory,
A Rose you were among so many flowers.

Warmly Inside strutting In the darkest hours,
Following the path of ones heart.
A Rose you were among so many flowers,
You the moons' wonder from the start.

Following the path of ones heart,
I am scared and angry yet truly sorry.
You the moons' wonder from the start,
You left me grieving cold and lonely.

I am scared and angry yet truly sorry,
My heart broken asunder my Souls' pain enhanced.
You left me grieving cold and lonely,
Into a vortex chemically unbalanced.


A Collaboration by Liam Mcdaid & Michael Clarke.

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Paul Callus

Date: 11/29/2014 5:13:00 PM

You have carried on perfectly from where you stopped in part1; had no doubt it would! You two worked wonders together. I am sure this partnership can yield further excellent results! Well done. // paul

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 12/1/2014 5:45:00 AM

paul we are working on a few pieces together wonderful comment dear friend heartfelt bless you pal

Thomas Carney

Date: 11/29/2014 8:13:00 AM

Making amends in one's heart is a liberating experience versus holding things, especially hurt, resentments, all kinds of emotions, inside. To me, this is a resounding achievement, being a collaboration even more so. The structure was good, balanced and the gods of Pantoumony would be pleased. Congrats, Thomas

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 12/1/2014 5:42:00 AM

thank you thomas for the dazzling beautiful comment dear friend mike drew the magic with his pen i must say bless you