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Distant Pipes Lament-The End

Distant Pipes Lament - The End - A Collaboration Standing out most beautiful lady, Warmly Inside strutting In the darkest hours. As warm before me you stand In glory, A Rose you were among so many flowers. Warmly Inside strutting In the darkest hours, Following the path of ones heart. A Rose you were among so many flowers, You the moons' wonder from the start. Following the path of ones heart, I am scared and angry yet truly sorry. You the moons' wonder from the start, You left me grieving cold and lonely. I am scared and angry yet truly sorry, My heart broken asunder my Souls' pain enhanced. You left me grieving cold and lonely, Into a vortex chemically unbalanced. A Collaboration by Liam Mcdaid & Michael Clarke.

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Paul Callus

Date: 11/29/2014 5:13:00 PM

You have carried on perfectly from where you stopped in part1; had no doubt it would! You two worked wonders together. I am sure this partnership can yield further excellent results! Well done. // paul

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 12/1/2014 5:45:00 AM

paul we are working on a few pieces together wonderful comment dear friend heartfelt bless you pal

Thomas Carney

Date: 11/29/2014 8:13:00 AM

Making amends in one's heart is a liberating experience versus holding things, especially hurt, resentments, all kinds of emotions, inside. To me, this is a resounding achievement, being a collaboration even more so. The structure was good, balanced and the gods of Pantoumony would be pleased. Congrats, Thomas

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 12/1/2014 5:42:00 AM

thank you thomas for the dazzling beautiful comment dear friend mike drew the magic with his pen i must say bless you

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 11/29/2014 7:45:00 AM

Well done Pantoum Liam and Michael. We always wonder way, to late. All we can do is learn and move on. Think of it as a second chance.

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/29/2014 7:57:00 AM

so true brenda wonderful comment dear pal heartfelt appreciated bless you