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Distant Dreams

In distant dreams my love would 'oft appear, In awe she wanders Springtime's vibrant hills, As wild bird songs exalt with merry cheer, 'Mid lesser celandine and daffodils. In this majestic slumber I am lost, Her beauty fair to woo my smitten eye, From sprouting buds 'till blooms bedecked with frost, Her lips afar, I wish our kiss be nigh. My minds eye sees her prance lush meadows green, While cirrus sky beholds her countenance, On Nature's throne, she reigns as Noble Queen, I yearn to tread those fields in fiery dance. If I held all my dreams since life begun, I'd hap'ly fling them all away... but one !

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 3/17/2017 5:59:00 AM
Extremely romantic and draws the reader into your dream world. Love it.
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Mick Mac
Date: 3/17/2017 7:42:00 AM
Thank you Phil for your kind visit. Regards Mick.
Date: 3/15/2017 11:54:00 PM
I am waiting for you to post another poem Mick. I wrote my first ever Limerick which is only laughable because it is so bad, but it is in honor of you....... Mick Mac How Mick Mac used to make the girls swoon When he sang to them under the moon. One tried to impress Wearing a green dress Then she sang him a St. Paddy's tune! Best wishes, Connie
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 3/17/2017 3:03:00 AM
I enjoyed your Limerick very much Mick. Thank you! Shields is my Irish family name from Co. Cork. I've visited Ireland three times and love the west best. You have a great St. Paddy's Day too! Blessings, Connie ; )
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Mick Mac
Date: 3/16/2017 1:17:00 PM
Dear Connie, I'd never have guessed, That you...for St.Paddy get dressed, A Poetess in green, Like an Oirish Coleen, Be Gorrah ! I'm rather impressed . Thank you Connie.... Have a Great Paddy's Day. Regards Mick.
Date: 3/7/2017 5:36:00 PM
Ahhh, encore, encore! I faved this one too! You have a poet's romantic soul Mick. 7 Cheers, Connie ; )
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Mick Mac
Date: 3/8/2017 12:50:00 PM
Thank you for your kindness Connie.... Regards Mick.

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