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Distance Leads To Temptation

Lord, lead me not into temptation Away you, I'm not sure, teach me not This exercise in longing, I will forget Your verse of homelessness, as your son Illuminate the distance between me, and you Forgive me, your garden trespassed, don't Exile me out into forlorn space again Heaven and satellites are your art Here on my moon far from the sun, you Lead me to that lonesome capsule, back Where a stained spacesuit hides me, listen To the hissing suit sweet-talking me, I go Wearing that damned suit, pull down the visor To cover my face from your rays, head To my own sea of tranquility alone On the dark side of the moon, far From your reach, I’ll own my kingdom From your moondust, build a sand castle of sin On the rim of an unholy crater, I’ll declare Independence from your colonial rule I’ll put on this old suit of debauchery again Until you strip your prodigal child, attempting A break from orbit, telling me I have all I need For a moonshot closing the distance Deliver me from a solitary capsule, lifeless On the cold lunar surface, temptation lives Stay my evil hand that turns the airlock Watch me float out the hatch from afar, hiss Your gravity too heavy to bear, God, watch Me bounce to the dark side of the moon Though here comes the sun again, coax Me a sinner unbaptized by midnight Each revolution, you test my faith Turn not distance to despair, rather Instill the space between, patience Turn not my freedom to anarchy, but Faith in tethered orbits, closer Turn not my soul into a cancer, hungry Temptations eating a moon misled Thy will be undone away from you

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Date: 9/2/2023 12:21:00 PM
The intention is maybe tomorrow you'll give in to temptation, but stay strong today
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Date: 9/1/2023 10:44:00 PM
My knowledge of the bible is scant despite my lifetime of Catholic education - however I liked the forgiveness angle. I'm pretty tame with the sinning but I know giving things up makes them tempting - sometimes a change in perspective about why a certain lifestyle choice is no longer happening is helpful as feeling denied is a strong feeling that defeats many whereas 'maybe tomorrow' can help to keep focus. Best wishes
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Triny Xiang
Date: 9/2/2023 7:40:00 AM
You are wise beyond my ranting words. It's hard taking a pacifier away from the unconsolable, but maybe tomorrow, as you wrote, I can make better lifestyle choices and stand on my God-given two feet. Thank you.
Date: 9/1/2023 5:04:00 PM
When tempted, no one should say, “God is tempting me.” For God cannot be tempted by evil, nor does he tempt anyone; but each person is tempted when they are dragged away by their own evil desire and enticed. Then, after desire has conceived, it gives birth to sin; and sin, when it is full-grown, gives birth to death. James 1:13?-?15 NIV Very thoughtful poem you have put together, hope to see more , a deep thinker you are
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Stephan McBride
Date: 9/3/2023 12:58:00 PM
Love it, it's a battle my friend of the unseen, much love and prayers to you for seeking God's word in these days, May God's promised indwelling spirit give guidance, comfort, peace, love and joy in abundance: ).
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Triny Xiang
Date: 9/2/2023 7:36:00 AM
Thank you for your thoughtful response. I was riffing on the Lord's Prayer when He said, "lead me not into temptation". Yes, it's us who give in to temptation, but what lies before temptation? For me, it's longing and distance. Chasing the highs, the lows, or missing what's lost far from grace. Humbled by your words, I'm just a thinker lost in the deep. I have disturbed the angle of the poem thanks to you.

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