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Distance Leads To Temptation

Lord, lead me not into temptation
Away you, I'm not sure, teach me not 
This exercise in longing, I will forget
Your verse of homelessness, as your son 
Illuminate the distance between me, and you 
Forgive me, your garden trespassed, don't
Exile me out into forlorn space again
Heaven and satellites are your art

Here on my moon far from the sun, you 
Lead me to that lonesome capsule, back
Where a stained spacesuit hides me, listen
To the hissing suit sweet-talking me, I go
Wearing that damned suit, pull down the visor
To cover my face from your rays, head
To my own sea of tranquility alone
On the dark side of the moon, far

From your reach, I’ll own my kingdom
From your moondust, build a sand castle of sin 
On the rim of an unholy crater, I’ll declare 
Independence from your colonial rule
I’ll put on this old suit of debauchery again
Until you strip your prodigal child, attempting 
A break from orbit, telling me I have all I need
For a moonshot closing the distance

Deliver me from a solitary capsule, lifeless 
On the cold lunar surface, temptation lives
Stay my evil hand that turns the airlock
Watch me float out the hatch from afar, hiss
Your gravity too heavy to bear, God, watch 
Me bounce to the dark side of the moon 
Though here comes the sun again, coax
Me a sinner unbaptized by midnight

Each revolution, you test my faith 
Turn not distance to despair, rather 
Instill the space between, patience
Turn not my freedom to anarchy, but
Faith in tethered orbits, closer
Turn not my soul into a cancer, hungry
Temptations eating a moon misled
Thy will be undone away from you

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Date: 9/1/2023 5:04:00 PM
When tempted, no one should say, “God is tempting me.” For God cannot be tempted by evil, nor does he tempt anyone; but each person is tempted when they are dragged away by their own evil desire and enticed. Then, after desire has conceived, it gives birth to sin; and sin, when it is full-grown, gives birth to death. James 1:13?-?15 NIV Very thoughtful poem you have put together, hope to see more , a deep thinker you are
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Stephan McBride
Date: 9/3/2023 12:58:00 PM
Love it, it's a battle my friend of the unseen, much love and prayers to you for seeking God's word in these days, May God's promised indwelling spirit give guidance, comfort, peace, love and joy in abundance: ).
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Triny Xiang
Date: 9/2/2023 7:36:00 AM
Thank you for your thoughtful response. I was riffing on the Lord's Prayer when He said, "lead me not into temptation". Yes, it's us who give in to temptation, but what lies before temptation? For me, it's longing and distance. Chasing the highs, the lows, or missing what's lost far from grace. Humbled by your words, I'm just a thinker lost in the deep. I have disturbed the angle of the poem thanks to you.

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