Skat A Poet Couplet

Distance

DISTANCE

Walking towards the light 
Leaving behind a wink of the night

Ignoring the massive things between
Exploding with all the things I've seen

Reality to dreams, it may be
Blinded by the ways of me

Without knowing my deception
Painting myself with a bad description

About me, I have no reason to lie
Some things should never be asked why?

A sickening motion due to gravity
When life decays turn into a cavity

Life will soon find a solution 
Ahead of myself like a resolution

Developing the pictures of all time
Predicting a way out of a single crime

I sit and listen to all incoming observations
While my mind is lost in its own rotation

Losing myself in a severe way
I hate the way I wake up everyday.

          
S.K.A.T.

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Street Poet July 5, 2016 at 5:05 AM Very nice dear.. Good expression

Just James May 5, 2016 at 4:55 AM Great write!

Diana Bosa March 20, 2016 at 3:36 PM It's truly impressive. :-)

Paul Callus December 29, 2015 at 7:19 AM There are times when we hate ourselves, even for the most silly things! Morning moods need silence...and a jolly good breakfast:) ~ Wishing you all the very best for 2016 ~ Hugs // paul

Constance La France September 3, 2015 at 2:46 PM Skat, a deep powerful write and thanks for my placement of tangerine sky ~~

Robin Davis March 2, 2014 at 11:13 AM SKAT Such powerful and deep words. The intensity in your words are right from your heart and it shows. Nice job Thanks once again for the birthday wishes and comment on my poem.

Len Gasun November 23, 2013 at 10:48 PM Good am my dearest sis Skat! So glad & an honor for me to visit u today & one of your stellar poems. So glad I found this one. You did an excellent job on this couplets my dearest sis & friend. Perfect and so amazing in every way. I extremely love how honesty is creatively expressed. As a sayng goes, honesty is the best policy. We're just human but we're greatly love esp. by Him. It's in honesty that we're more accepted and loved. Loving & hugging this stellar couplet & U. TYSM! lovem4evrLeo

Zoria Gregory July 4, 2013 at 1:04 PM Hi Skat - thank you for the comment on one of my poems. I thought to walk into your world a bit and read many of yours....very nice and I really liked this one! Z

Abdulhafeez Oyewole May 8, 2013 at 12:13 PM Very impressive... Good work... You talked about naming a particular poem, on my list. How can we go about it.. Welcome back from the break.. Hope to see your new stuffs ~A.O

Lynette Chachere August 20, 2010 at 5:14 PM Thanks Irma, hope your night is an ease.(: and hows life lately.. ~Always&Forever Lynette

Rinki Nandy June 29, 2010 at 11:25 AM loved the rhyme and the thought and the idea, isn't there a distance in every emotion, day, relationship which grows with very passing day? thank you for your lovely words on my poem..while you are alive.

Gert W. Knop June 3, 2010 at 4:46 AM Hi SKAT, thank you for your ongoing kind comments and have a great day...Gert

Wendy Rader May 29, 2010 at 7:41 AM I like the way you focus and the way it flows.

Susan Mills May 25, 2010 at 2:23 PM I really liked the rhyme to this poem. Love, Susan

De R May 24, 2010 at 11:51 AM Good rhyming and great flow...It conveys a sense of confusion.It's deep and beautiful.

Dillon Yap May 24, 2010 at 12:27 AM awesome poem i enjoyed reading it a lot!!! :)

Marie Harrison May 22, 2010 at 10:10 PM Smashing poem, we all have those sorts of days. Thank you so much for commenting on my poetry. Haven't figured out how to reply back to peoples comments yet.

Rauwolfia Ra May 20, 2010 at 5:03 AM Brilliant poem, I can't describe it in any other way.

Andrea Dietrich May 19, 2010 at 5:43 PM Great flow, Irma. I enjoyed. And I think your contest is getting some great results!!! You were brave to do two in a row like you did. I need to get on the ball and do another one too. LUv, andrea

Wilma Neels May 19, 2010 at 5:16 AM awesome rhyming Irma, enjoyed it!!- regards Wilma

Arcene Janvier May 18, 2010 at 7:28 AM NICE...I LIKE THIS POEM...BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN

Mohammad Hussain May 18, 2010 at 7:12 AM NICE RYHMS NICE VERSES NICE ACTS LOVED IT

Gert W. Knop May 18, 2010 at 5:42 AM Awesome write, Irma, nice rhymes!..Keep on writing...And thank you for your comments....Gert

Royal Trevino May 17, 2010 at 10:05 PM well the rhyming, awesome:), i love it , of course lol, your writes are pretty cool:), clever ending, love Royal<3

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 17, 2010 at 12:59 PM I sit and listen to all incoming observation..while my mind is lost in its own rotation.. OMG BBF Irma this is a magnificent line and the entire poem is awesome .. if I am the "Sweetheart" of P.S. u are definitely the "Darling" sweetie.. good luck and congrats on your first contest .. am leaving tomorrow for two weeks but have submitted an entry ..hope u like.. it was so fun and cool to write.. to support u... enjoy this new feature and will be on my laptop so will be in touch..luv.. to u..

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