Get Your Premium Membership

Display of nature - Clouds

DISPLAY OF NATURE - CLOUDS White clouds like cotton, Drifting by, floating away, Then darkening the sky, Clouds turning to a silver grey. Rumbling thunder breaks the silence, Flashing lights, way up high, Bolt of lightning strikes, Lighting up the whole sky!! Out of nowhere, Just as quickly, appears the rain, Refreshing the earth, Then disappearing again. The sun suddenly shines bright, Another beautiful nature display, Marshmallow clouds of dreams are back, Dancing along, slowly drifting away!!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 10/26/2024 8:25:00 AM
Daisy, beautiful poem, well done, love Constance
Login to Reply
Meadows Avatar
Daisy Meadows
Date: 10/27/2024 9:36:00 AM
Thank you so much. Glad you liked the poem! Your comments are appreciated!
Date: 10/24/2024 12:37:00 PM
A beautiful poem dear Daisy... You captured the scene so well.. Hope all is well with you..
Login to Reply
Meadows Avatar
Daisy Meadows
Date: 10/27/2024 9:35:00 AM
Thank you. So nice to receive such lovely comments! I am well, thank you. Hope you are well too!
Date: 10/24/2024 6:32:00 AM
Dear daisy, this is beautiful i love how vividly and seamlessly youv woven imagery throughout this poem, especially the opening really drew me in and i loved “ Marshmallow clouds of dreams are back, Dancing along, slowly drifting away!! “ soul warming! Pleasure reading your work: sending you light always
Login to Reply
Meadows Avatar
Daisy Meadows
Date: 10/27/2024 9:33:00 AM
Thank you so much for your lovely comments, Ink Empress. I appreciate your encouraging words and taking the time to read my posts! Hope you are having a wonderful weekend!

Book: Reflection on the Important Things