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Disperse These Cretins!

Brisk breeze blows before grim gray gargoyle clouds explode with static glee rinsing the joyous sweat from fleeing parents and progeny scattering like insects in the spray of annoyance at their sheer existence.

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/21/2010 7:07:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Andrea Dietrich's contest "Etheree Me" Gerard. Love, Carol

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 6/20/2010 7:31:00 PM

I love the natural flow of this poem and the toch of alliteration. Congratulations on your success in the contest. Blessings, Joseph

Joyce Johnson

Date: 6/20/2010 7:11:00 PM

Nice build up to the last surprising line. Congratulations on your hm. Love, Joyce

Date: 6/20/2010 3:13:00 PM

Nice use of alliteration for a creative perspective. Congratulations on being a winner in Andrea's contest. Enjoy your success. Keep that pen flowing. Karen

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/20/2010 4:15:00 AM

Thanks so much for participating in my contest and congrats on your HM. LUv, Andrea

John Freeman

Date: 6/13/2010 3:29:00 PM

Cool Ethree Gerard, You should do well with this in Andrea's amazing contest. I left for you my response to your comment on my own Etheree. Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/13/2010 2:33:00 PM

EXCELLENT Gerard.. what an exciting theme for the contest for Andrea... she will luv this entry..much good luck and success ... I also did a blog on Saint Anthony too..if u care to look.. I have been to Padua in Italy where the Basilica was built and his tongue lies in repose... u are the second guy today who has commented so eloquently on my lyric song and the blog is good too.. always so nice to see your name on my comments list Gerard... with luv from the "SWeetheart"

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 6/13/2010 12:08:00 PM

Good luck in the contest, Gerard. I'm sure it's a winner....Later, Jimmy

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/12/2010 8:54:00 PM

A wonderful Senryu. Good luck in the contest

Audrey Haick

Date: 6/12/2010 7:40:00 PM

As always, perfect form, great imagery..goes to my favs...Hey Gerard, I posted my first Blog today..so pls go read it and leave a comment when you have some time, ok? Thanks...Peace, Audrey

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/12/2010 3:37:00 PM

Really like the way you captivate the imagination with this scene, Gerard. Excellent etheree! Enjoyed the alliteration in the first four lines as well. Love, Carolyn