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Disperse These Cretins!

Brisk
breeze blows
before grim 
gray gargoyle clouds
explode with static glee
rinsing the joyous sweat from
fleeing parents and progeny
scattering like insects in the spray
of annoyance at their sheer existence.

Copyright © Gerard Keogh Jr. | Year Posted 2010

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Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 6/21/2010 7:07:00 AM Congratulations on your win in Andrea Dietrich's contest "Etheree Me" Gerard. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Joseph Spence Sr Date: 6/20/2010 7:31:00 PM I love the natural flow of this poem and the toch of alliteration. Congratulations on your success in the contest. Blessings, Joseph Login to Reply

Joyce Johnson Date: 6/20/2010 7:11:00 PM Nice build up to the last surprising line. Congratulations on your hm. Love, Joyce Login to Reply

Date: 6/20/2010 3:13:00 PM Nice use of alliteration for a creative perspective. Congratulations on being a winner in Andrea's contest. Enjoy your success. Keep that pen flowing. Karen Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/20/2010 4:15:00 AM Thanks so much for participating in my contest and congrats on your HM. LUv, Andrea Login to Reply

John Freeman Date: 6/13/2010 3:29:00 PM Cool Ethree Gerard, You should do well with this in Andrea's amazing contest. I left for you my response to your comment on my own Etheree. Agape, Moses Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 6/13/2010 2:33:00 PM EXCELLENT Gerard.. what an exciting theme for the contest for Andrea... she will luv this entry..much good luck and success ... I also did a blog on Saint Anthony too..if u care to look.. I have been to Padua in Italy where the Basilica was built and his tongue lies in repose... u are the second guy today who has commented so eloquently on my lyric song and the blog is good too.. always so nice to see your name on my comments list Gerard... with luv from the "SWeetheart" Login to Reply

Jimmy Anderson Date: 6/13/2010 12:08:00 PM Good luck in the contest, Gerard. I'm sure it's a winner....Later, Jimmy Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 6/12/2010 8:54:00 PM A wonderful Senryu. Good luck in the contest Login to Reply

Audrey Haick Date: 6/12/2010 7:40:00 PM As always, perfect form, great imagery..goes to my favs...Hey Gerard, I posted my first Blog today..so pls go read it and leave a comment when you have some time, ok? Thanks...Peace, Audrey Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 6/12/2010 3:37:00 PM Really like the way you captivate the imagination with this scene, Gerard. Excellent etheree! Enjoyed the alliteration in the first four lines as well. Love, Carolyn Login to Reply