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i dis(miss you, altogether,
too much to mis)take
me away, g(host of all
evils, whispering trans)fix
my sickness, steady
em(brace yourself, as
i braid your nerves in
one long str)and tell
me you like it.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Kendrick Avatar
January 30, 2010 at 3:51 PM
Very impressive work in this one the play on words is excellent. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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