Joyce Johnson Poet Monorhyme

Disenchantment

Young Willie wooed his girl at night
And wed her in soft candlelight. 
Next morning when the sun was bright,
Young Willie contemplated flight.

By; Joyce Johnson
For: By Candlelight contest

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Carol Sunshine Brown March 12, 2012 at 8:18 AM Congratulations on your placement in Russell's "By Candlelight" contest Joyce. Love,Carol

Kim Merryman March 11, 2012 at 5:46 PM Congrats on your win, Joyce! Love, Kim

Jack Horne March 11, 2012 at 6:11 AM LOL, yes, we were on the same page, as they say! Love it. Poor Willie... Many congrats on all your wins, Joyce : )

Kash Poet March 10, 2012 at 11:28 AM Congratulations Joyce on your win.Love it.

Sashi Prabhu March 10, 2012 at 7:15 AM short and sweet verse.........congrats on the placement.........~sashi

Ralph Taylor March 9, 2012 at 7:15 PM Congrats, Joyce. Outstanding piece. Enjoyed. Nice going. Have a great weekend and don't forget to Spring Ahead. God bless. luv and hugs, Ralphie

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 9, 2012 at 6:56 PM congrats Joyce on an exciting win for unique words of candlelight wooing luv.. happy weekend..

Anne-Lise Andresen March 6, 2012 at 6:26 AM Well done Joyce, good luck in contest. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Kim Merryman March 5, 2012 at 12:38 PM This is great, Joyce. I'm sure Russell will like this witty write. Love, Kim

Mohammad Yamin March 5, 2012 at 10:27 AM What an enchanting write, Joyce. A beautiful depiction of human lust -a painful reality. -Mohammad